|Hi again :)
Wow, this is a fantastic fanfiction story K5! I enjoyed reading it. I know a few people (not users of this website) that would very much enjoy delving into this. I'd be happy to pass on my findings to them for you.
I particularly liked the feel of the story, and it flowed well. It kept my attention and although I am a writer I am not overly keen on lengthy stories, preferring short stories, philosophies, poetry and psychology reads, however, you may have added a new string to my bow with this.
Keep up the excellent work!