Wow, this is a fantastic fanfiction story K5! I enjoyed reading it. I know a few people (not users of this website) that would very much enjoy delving into this. I'd be happy to pass on my findings to them for you.
I particularly liked the feel of the story, and it flowed well. It kept my attention and although I am a writer I am not overly keen on lengthy stories, preferring short stories, philosophies, poetry and psychology reads, however, you may have added a new string to my bow with this.
This was so heartfelt, it touched me. I love this kind of poetry, the inquisition with put ourselves through trying to understand the dynamics between a lover and oneself. This poetry felt real and from experience, if it was not, then even more kudos points to you. It was truly lovely, thank you for sharing your wonderful mind.
What a fabulous poem of the festive season and the warmth and joy and excitement and togetherness it promotes and leads to a comfortable, easy feeling inside. I loved this, and it took me to that moment, great imagery indeed and the rhyming flowed lovely.
A beautiful beginning, middle and ending to this wonderfully positive outcome for two lovers meeting online to finally meeting in person. I enjoyed reading this, it's light dignified manner and flow of words was easy to follow. It has also been left open to the mystery of what might come ahead. Hopefully, I can look forward to more x
Really enjoyed reading this, it was very heartfelt tinged with a feeling of sorrow and felt with a positive outcome of support and overall understanding of the other person's flaws. Well done x