I really enjoyed this. It was simple, yet very inspiring, with a clear message. I feel that it flowed rather nicely, probably due to the meter, and the rhymes were made with ease. It is organized and nicely written. The poem effects me, because I enjoy the message so much. The last line is great, and really brought it all together.
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