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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
This story is cool.
I really liked the way you did the boy meet with Lucario.
But this story is too short, I think you need to put more dialogue.
The dialogue would enhance your story, making it longer and most interesting.
I rated your story in 4/5 because the story is short.
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