I liked the way you found beauty in many different things. The imagery was created by clever use of nature. I also liked the way you ended it by not being outdoors.
FYI, you spelled "mossy" - mossey. And you are missing an "i" in squirrel.
I truly enjoyed reading your poem and I wish I could write poems like you. I've been an agnostic for few years and I truly believe things are unknown and unknowable.
Can I ask you a bi favor? I'm still a novice writer and just finished this essay base of my opinion as an agnostic person. Titled "AGNOSTIC".
If you have the time to read it please do. I could use all the help I could get so please review it and rate it. Just be honest.
I liked reading your opion on religion very much.
I believe in agnosticism. I agree with you on most of what you wrote.
I wrote an essay AGNOSTIC and I was wondering if you could check it out for me. I'm still a novice writer and could use some help.
If you have the time please rate and review my work.
I truly liked reading your philosophy about religion. I agree with you and I'm glad. It's very well written and I hope you could take a look at mine.
As you know Agnostics gets prejudged by someone who is faithful as a lost soul or something worse.
I wrote an essay AGNOSTIC and I wanted a review and / or rating from someone like you. I would appreciate it if you could take the time to check it out. I'm still a novice writer so I could use all the help I could get.
I liked your prose a lot. Very interesting and mystical imagery.
I'm an agnostic but I'm not an atheist. Like you I have my own opinion and curiosity about things.
I wrote an essay AGNOSTIC. Can you please read it for me and give me a review? Be honest because I'm still a novice writer. I need all the help I can get.
I loved your IMAGINE THE POSSIBILITES because it was so beautifully done. I wish you had more with the traditional dragon in that realm instead of the fiery ONE SMILE. I was born and raised in Yokohama and I'm a Shoriji-ryu Karate black belt. Shorinji is a Japanese way of saying Shaolin. As you probably know, Dragons were my schools main thing. Our logo even signified it. Dragons have a negative connotation in a Christian realm but not where I come. I had attended Catholic school but I see no evil in dragons. I still go back to Japan almost every year so I could help you promote some of you stuff there if you'd like.
I also love animals. I loved your ANCIENT ONES & BEAUTY IS AN ATTITUDE.
I'm also into flowers. TREE BLOSSOMS was nice, too.
This is a very nice piece. It flows very well, and it successfully captures the essence of the Native American spirituality. The mood it creates are both mystical and haunting. I used to go to Navajo Tribe Awareness functions in Santa Monica Community College in California, back in the 80's. That's where I was intrigued by the perils of the American Natives. I have so much respect for them, especially the older generation.
Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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