Alex Valentino's (wiseword) Reviews

Alex Valentino

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11 Public Reviews Given

32 Total Reviews Given

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Review of A Father's Legacy-Forged in Perseverance

Review by Alex Valentino

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Well written and honest.. You're obviously a well grounded father, the emotional connection is clear to see..

The lack of rhyme in this instance gives your writing much more impact, I commend your work.

Keep going and I look forward to exploring more of your writing..

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Review of Don’t Tell My Family I Lost My Job

Review by Alex Valentino

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

You paint a vivid mental picture of the torture of expectations from those around us, well done!

The pain and fear of discovery is palpable, well done!

Keep writing.

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Review of The Threesome

Review by Alex Valentino

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

I like the story and the content, it flows well. It reads like a snap shot of a film scene. It would be nice however if a little more of the scene was set at the start, apart from that nicely done..

Keep writing!

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Review of This is What I Wish To Do

Review by Alex Valentino

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

This reads as a very personal statement and sums up what everybody is truely looking for out of life and relationships. My constructive comment would be to attempt to even out the syllabul count in the 5th and 6th stanza, It flows really well for the first 4 but looses its balance and punchyness at the end.