Highly creative start to a great story in the making. Can't wait to read the next chapter of GD's new life as a guardian to a village.
Hope to see more of your work for this series in the future.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
A touching and beautifully well written short story Derg. Glad to hear others helping to inspire your work.
Hope to continue seeing your work as time continues to flow forward.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
A grand idea for a interactive. Don't see a lot of interactives like this that link to the Digimon series.
Hope to see more of your work as time flow by all but the old man of time.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
New year's are always a bit fun to celebrate.
Sure, it's a bit scary to leave parts of the past behind. But the future can only be discovered by using the past as a guide.
Loved reading this.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
A bit confusing, but a fun read non the less. It was a great poem to read.
😋Kinda enjoyed reading it to the kids just to confuse them.😋
Hope to see more of your work in the future.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Hahaha! Cute, well worded, and greatly versed. A truly fun and cute poem.
Kinda makes me want to tell the kids to go out and rake the leaves off the ground.
Hope to see more of your work in the future. May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Great story you have here. Shows what happens when unexpected variables cannot be seen ahead of time when the brave are moving forward to a destination.
Hope to see more of your work in the future.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Hahaha! I love it!
Humorous, poetic, and well versed through the short poetic story.
Your truly gifted with a great mind in creating verses. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
Best of luck to you in learning english. It may be tough at times, but you'll get it down in no time.
Hope to see more of your work as time continues to flow forward and past all but the old man of time himself.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Beautifully well versed, woerded, and organized.
Truly tells how the wind has it's way of whispering through ourears and into our minds and hearts.
Hope to see more of your work in the future. May your creativity continue to run Wild for all to enjoy.
Well worded story of how Antonio spent his time in 2020 on the 2nd day.
As for Gary, hope he fails miserably and ends up in prison.
Enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of your work in the future.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Haha! Oh man, what a trip will do to you when unprepared. But, I gotta admit, the story you have here is definently one for the books.
All that for pizza and family. Awsome work.
Hope to see more of your work as time continues to fly by all but the old man of time.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
A grand way to give a mother a happy way to begin another year. It was amazing how well described you created this wish for mothers everywhere.
Hope to see more of your work in the future to come.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Very creative of how you mixed war and love into this. Don't really see work like this made very much.
Hope to see more of your work in the future as time continues to flow past all but the old man of time.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
Well made, well described, and well organized.
Definently reminds me pf the spring time as animals emerge from hibernation and new life is brought into the world.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Have fun!
Hope I didn't introduce the turtles too early, but like you said, they might be seen in the story.
Really enjoying helping out in another of your campfire's again. And before ya ask, I'm still watching you on Fanfiction, and reading your stories to the kids.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
Eeup, that'll do! MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
A great idea for a "In and Out" you have created here. Really got the mind going on this morning of Christmas Eve.
May your creativity continue to run wild with jolly and cheer for all to enjoy!
The choices one must make to ensure that santa is fashoinable to the public. ...
Ah, who am I kidding! Had to go with the elastic suite. All the milk and cookies gotta go somewhere, right?
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
Grand idea for a interactive. Really makes one think of what the future might bring.
Really hope to see this interactive grow in both scenario's, and chapters for everyone to enjoy.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
Quite the tale you have created. Starting to wonder how it will end.
Grand work on weaving a story as always. Hope to see more of your work as time continues to flow forward past us all but the old man of time himself.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
Grand idea for a interactive. Anything can happen when a flea is involved to mess with things.
Sorry for not being able to add for so long, been busy between three kids and farming... Been real busy past few weeks.
Hope to see this grow in chapters in time to come. May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy in the future.
A interesting idea for a interactive. Especially after how the episode this is named after went.
A true twist to how life in the life of a grand cartoon can go, and shows how just one simple scenario can change the life of all who is apart of it.
Hope to see more of your work soon. May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
Grand idea for a interactive. In fact, it's so grand, it reminds me of something a master in his own right once said.
"To me, writing is fun. It doesn't matter what your writing, as long as you can tell a story. -Stan Lee"
Hope to see this, and the characters as well, grow and transform this interactive into something never seen before.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy.
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