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This is some old poetry from back when I still wrote poetry. check it out.
#1--Scraps of Paper
I wrote this while on cleanup duty at a campsite, hence the title.  People tell me it should be a rap.

These are the eyes that scrutinize
all the things the size
of flies,
I can see through all their lies.
Even a disguise
that mystifies
is no disguise,
it's no surprise,
before these eyes.

#2--Bandanna
A red-themed paisley bandanna inspired this poem.  in it, I play heck with compositional rules

Migraine
my pain
pantomiming entertain-
ment always playing
massive postal all insane
curious relation:  Cain
those abhorrent ascertain
fury's milling weathervane
steam train
membrane
moving my pain
all circumference in my brain
psyche's fight gone down the drain
emotional stain
here abstain
here be slain

#3--Untitled
I never finished this one, and probably never will because I have no idea what i was talking about.  judging from my notes, it might have been a song.

Fury's curiosity
waning mediocrity
It's mysterious
most delerious
all oblivious
mystery
feeling fine
when I am dying
feeling my insanity
give my sign
when I am crying
failing in simplicity
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