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Rated: E · Short Story · Contest Entry · #2350896

Smoke rises from chimneys and disappears into a sky full of stars.

The village of Brindle Hollow sat so deep in the valley that winter seemed to forget how to let go. Cold months stretched on until the people joked that they lived in the season itself. Still, the place glowed with a kind of stubborn warmth. Every home had soft yellow light spilling through frosted windows, and every chimney sent thin ribbons of smoke into the star heavy sky. At night the mountains rested like giant shapes curled around the edge of the world. Snow muffled even the smallest sounds until it felt like the whole valley held its breath.

Mara Lenton had grown up with that quiet. It was the first thing she noticed whenever she came home from the city. She used to think the silence meant she was safe. As she got older she learned it also meant she could hear her thoughts a bit too well. This winter she returned with a heavy heart and a letter tucked in her coat pocket. Her mother had written it a week before she passed. Mara still could not bring herself to read it.

She walked the village road the night she arrived. It was lined with glowing windows. The soft snow made everything look peaceful. Children slid across frozen patches of ground near the bakery and an old couple shuffled toward the tavern with their shoulders pressed together for warmth. The smell of pine and wood smoke filled the air. It had been years since Mara let herself enjoy it.

Her mother always said winter taught a person patience. Mara wondered now if it also taught a sort of still courage, the kind you never notice until you need it.

The old family cabin waited at the very end of the road. Its small porch light cast a warm circle across the snow. Mara hesitated before opening the door. She half expected to hear her mothers voice calling from the kitchen. But no sound greeted her, only the soft creak of the old wood. The place felt frozen in time. Her mothers knitting lay beside her favorite chair as if left there an hour earlier. A pot still hung above the small hearth.

Mara dropped her bag and sat at the table. The letter in her pocket felt heavier than her coat.

She was not ready for it.

Instead she lit the old lantern that always sat on the counter. Her mother used it during storms when the power lines went down. The flame gave the room a soft orange glow that warmed her face. She set it by the window and watched the way the light pushed at the darkness outside.

That was when she saw a figure walking along the road.

At first she thought it was a neighbor. But the figure moved slowly, almost unsure of where to step. Mara leaned closer and squinted through the cold glass. Something about the way the person held himself made her chest tighten.

She grabbed her coat and stepped outside. The air bit at her skin and the snow cracked softly under her boots. The silence felt deeper than usual.

As she approached, the figure lifted their head. It was a boy, maybe ten years old. His cheeks were red from the cold and he clutched a small cloth bag in one hand.

"Hey," Mara said gently. "You look lost. Are you all right"

The boy blinked slowly as if trying to decide whether he could trust her. Then he nodded, but the motion seemed unsure.

"Where are your parents" she asked.

He pointed toward the mouth of the valley, the direction of the forest path that curled up the mountain. His hand shook a little.

Mara frowned. "Did you get separated from them"

He did not speak, only lowered his hand and stared at her lantern light behind her.

"Come on," she said, keeping her voice soft. "You should warm up. We can figure out where they are."

He followed her back to the cabin. When he stepped inside, the warm air hit his shoulders and he let out a breath that almost sounded like relief. He sat by the hearth without being asked and held his hands out toward the heat.

Mara tended the fire while watching him from the corner of her eye. There was something strange in the way he looked around the room. Not frightened. Not lost. More like he knew the place. Or remembered it.

"I am Mara," she said. "What is your name"

He hesitated as if searching for it. Then he whispered, "Col."

The name felt familiar in a way she could not place. Maybe she had known a Col from school or something like that. Brindle Hollow was the kind of place where everyone knew each other by face or story.

"Did you walk far" she asked.

Col nodded. He reached into his small bag and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He stared at it for a long moment before handing it to her.

Mara unfolded it carefully. Inside was a rough drawing of the village and a single mark placed at the very end of the road. Her family cabin. The drawing was simple but clear. A single word rested under the marked house.

Home.

She looked at Col. His eyes were fixed on the lantern. Its flame reflected in them like twin sparks.

"Who gave this to you" she asked quietly.

He shrugged a little. It almost seemed like he did not know the answer himself.

The fire popped softly. Snow fell thicker outside. The mountains pressed at the edges of her view like tall shadows. Mara thought of her mother again. Her mother had believed every moment had meaning, even the ones that scared you.

Something about this boy settled deep in Mara’s chest. A strange sense that he had been guided here for a reason.

"You can stay the night," she said. "We will go to the village council in the morning and see if anyone is missing a child."

Col nodded. Then he looked straight at her and spoke in a small quiet voice.

"She wanted you to read the letter."

A chill that had nothing to do with winter passed through her. "Who told you that"

He looked at his bag again. "She said you would not be ready at first. But the lantern would help."

Mara felt the room tighten around her. Her hand went to her coat pocket without thinking. She knew he meant her mother. She had no idea how he could know that.

"Col," she said gently, "how do you know about my mother"

He did not answer. Instead he curled up in the chair by the fire and closed his eyes. It took only a breath or two before he fell asleep.

Mara sat frozen for a long time. The lantern flame flickered against the walls. Snow thickened outside until the windows looked painted white. The mountains felt closer than ever, like silent watchers.

Finally she took out the letter.

Her mothers handwriting covered the small envelope. The edges were worn from all the times she had touched it then stopped herself from opening it.

She broke the seal.

Mara,

If you are reading this, you have found your way home. I want you to know that I have never once doubted your strength, even on the days when you doubted it yourself. Winter teaches us to listen. When the valley grows quiet you can finally hear what your heart has been trying to say.

You do not need to carry everything alone. The ones we lose do not leave us. They light the way ahead even when the road feels cold. You will meet reminders of this in small unexpected ways. Trust them. Trust yourself.

Let the lantern guide you. It has always been yours.

Love,
Mother

Mara pressed the paper to her chest. The lantern glowed beside her with a warm steady light. She looked over at Col.

He slept peacefully. The kind of peaceful that did not match a lost child who had wandered out into the valley alone.

Something clicked in her memory then. A story her mother used to tell her. A small tale passed around the village. It was about a boy who had wandered away from his home long ago during a terrible winter storm. The village searched for him for days but never found him. Some folks said his spirit still wandered the valley, guiding travelers who lost their way in the snow.

The boys name had been Col.

Mara exhaled slowly. She was not afraid. The cabin felt warmer than ever, as if wrapped in something protective and gentle.

When she woke the next morning the fire was still glowing. The lantern still burned softly. But Col was gone. The chair held only a slight impression where he had slept. Outside the snow was undisturbed except for a single line of footprints that led to the end of the porch and faded into the white.

Mara stood there for a long time before whispering, "Thank you."

She knew now she was ready to stay awhile. To listen. To heal. Brindle Hollow was a place of deep winters and long silences, but it was also a place where the heart could learn to speak again.

And sometimes, when the nights grew quiet enough, she would set the lantern by the window. Its soft glow reached into the darkness like a promise.

Somewhere out in the snow a small boy continued his patient wandering. And she liked the idea that maybe he had found a kind of peace too.
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