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Review by autumnlady
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well written. I like your description of your obsession. It is full of angst and frustration, yet is still very poetic. Well done *Smile*
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Review of The Road Uneven  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written with a good, positive slant. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of This is the Place  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (3.5)
A nice piece. A little confusing, but I guess life is confusing and contradictory *Smile*
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Review of Sleepless Night  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice piece. It needs a little work with cadence but nevertheless, the reader understands the emotions and feelings
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Review of A Whisper of Wind  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this piece. Very well written and thought through. Very emotive and tugs at the heartstrings.
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Review of Aqua Blue Lagoon  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well thought through and well written.
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Review of A Day To Remember  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hard to read written in Caps. Otherwise a nice piece
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Review of The Cardinal  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very well written! Your use of language and the story you tell is excellent. Your use of imagery and description is excellent. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of The Rose  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written. A good piece that makes the reader think about choices made. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of Do you write  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Use a pseudonym *Smile* Seriously, keep writing.
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Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (5.0)
Brilliant piece of work. Your use of language defines this work. The thought is the epicentre. Bravo! Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of 0% Understanding  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good piece of work. It tugs at the heartstrings. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review by autumnlady
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very good argument! I don't necessarily agree, however, your style of writing and the ideas and images you portray are excellent. You set the scene and draw the reader in. Your use of language is descriptive and exciting. You have obvious intellect and have made use of it in this philosophical argument. Well done! Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of August  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written with great emotion and hope. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of The Woman  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.0)
I prefer the other "Woman" piece. This one seems more stilted. It doesn't flow as well as the other. This one didn't pull me in with its storyline as well as the other. Nevertheless, it's still a very good piece (get it? piece) *Smile*
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Review of Another Woman  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this piece. Very well written and thought through. Good little twist in the tail (tale) *Smile*
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Review of circle of masks  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
A little confusing even though it is meant to be. Quite a few grammatical errors which can be easily fixed. Some continuity issues as well. Not a bad piece overall, though it needs some work.
"Read and enjoy or not, no one is forcing you to do so*" I find that sentence a little confronting. If you don't care if anyone reads this piece, then why put it up? Maybe a little false bravado? Keep writing *Smile*
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Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.5)
Bravo. This brought a tear to my eyes. A wonderful story of the magic of motherhood and the bond between a mother and child. I can relate to this piece so well.
Keep shining *Smile*
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Review of My Perfect Dream  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice little piece. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of "Time Out"  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well written piece. Very good use of descriptive imagery and words. It leaves the reader relaxed. I like it's starnkenss and brevity. Too much more would spoil the feeling. it's brief and to the point. I especially like "as night steals days breath away". Very poignant and moving. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review by autumnlady
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Very emotional piece. Very touching and heartfelt. Very descriptive with good imagery. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review by autumnlady
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A VERY dark piece. I sense some bitterness? Well written and emotive. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (3.0)
You have the beginning of a good story. It needs more use of descriptive words to set the scene. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of You  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very descriptive and emotive. I can feel you anger and fear. Keep writing *Smile*
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Review of Farewell Grieving  
Review by autumnlady
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good piece of poetry. It is descriptive and emotive. It has a certain cadence and your use of analogy is good. I can't find anything wrong with this work! Keep writing *Smile*
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