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Review of Admonitions  
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Oh yes, Ken, you said everything and more that my brain says inside of me.

I agree with you wholeheartedly.

It's time we woke up and become aware of what's happening around us and change it all in order to survive.

Your poem emphasizes it all at the correct places.

I wish more people thought like that. World would certainly be a better place, then.


Cheers!
Christina


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Review of Unencumbered  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Nice poem. *Smile*

How about leaving the word 'of' from the second line?

The rhyme is great even though I secretly wish you weren't bound by rhyme. Because I like your poems much better when they are free verse. As you tend to bring some sort of rhyme and flow even then. *Smile*

The essence of the poem as dictated by the prompt is clear and stark.

The utilization of prompt is well done.

Keep writing.


Cheers!
Christina


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Review of Colors of Fall  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

What a beautiful poem there, Ken!

You have described the fall so amazingly!

The picture is just perfect and so are your words.

Though, I must admit that difficult or rather long words make me stop and I don't like to look in a dictionary when I am enjoying a poem. So I just kept on reading and made up the meanings for myself as were evident to me by the sentences.

Beautiful vision and essence.. *Bigsmile*

Cheers!
Christina


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Review of Anticipation  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

This is such a beautiful poem, Ken! *Smile*

The words slip off my tongue like chocolate....Yumm! Thats what first came to my mind after reading your sultry, seductive and emotion filled poem.

I love the way how the photos at the beginning of your poem give me a vivid picture...

You do magic with words. From passion to pain... you have woven the words beautifully and I love the way you express yourself..

Ahh..my mind cannot escape the blackness of the night... what an Expression!

Kudos to you, buddy!

Keep writing!


Cheers!
Christina


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Review of IN THE MIST  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the title...in the mist..wow.. it gives itself such a surreal feel...as if away from reality..somewhere far.

The promises that were made resound in my ears and the gleam in eyes evident to me.

The trust I can feel and see the interlocked arms never meant to be separated.

But in life, the inevitable happens.

One moves on while the other stands true to his/her promise, waiting, craving...

The poem tugs at my heart. It is touching and heart-rending and talks of timeless love.

Love the last line especially.

Cheers!
Christina


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In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem full of heart touching feelings.

Oh the old lady, with no one to talk to...forgotten.

The poem stirred up feelings of fear, anger and empathy in me.

Your words hit hard, forcing one to notice and do something against this wrongdoing.

The poem is so true in today's world where this is the scenario all around. You write from your heart and it shows and feels like that.

Keep writing.


Cheers!
Christina


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Review of Stand With Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful, little poem there.

When I saw it, I thought..so short..

but once I finished reading it, I marvelled at the positive emotions, the views and the amazing feelings you have packed in so few words.


I loved the view and the imagery your words provided.

I loved the mist, the togetherness, the eternity, and especially the mountain dew. Mesmerizing!

In all, loved it, adored it!

Cheers!
Christina


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Review of Distance  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

What a beautiful, deep, heart rending song there. Marvellous!!

Love the rhythm and the rhyme and the way words slip off my tongue.

The words are deep, full of emotion...

painting a clear picture... but soon fog rises.. and gives it a translucent appearance.. this is the image I drew from your song.

Beautiful indeed.

No suggestions.

It is perfect.


Cheers!
Christina


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In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, Fyn! What a poem!

I had fun while reading this.

It has a great momentum! The words just flew right past my mouth. I was so eager to know what happened at the end.

The flow helped in my travel. As i almost sang it out loud. And oh my, what fun it was!

Especially when I reached the end and laughed out loud!

It's just amazing!

The concept, the words, the flow, the rhyme and rhythm.

Just perfect!

Keep writing!

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Cheers!
Christina


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Review of The Best Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An absolutely delightful read!! I am so glad I came by this.

Beautiful, heart-warming, soulful and just amazing! Mesmerizing to say the least.

Loved the concept and the content.

The way the poem progressed, the words it said.


i just adored it all. Starting with the mother's schedule to her love for her children and then the children's part. Lovely!

Very cute and adorable!

One suggestion:

Third stanza, last line : doesn't go very well with the flow.


In all, beautifully written.

Welcome to WDC!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .


Cheers!
Christina

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Review of You & Me  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Ha ha!

What a funny poem.

The usual + some twist!

And I liked the twist!

A cute poem.

Written in a ziffy,
read in seconds,
but the laughter that comes
is worth the end.

Sweet poem!

Suggestion: I wondered why each line began with a capitalized word? It makes it harder to read.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Alone  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The poem and its structure shows your feelings at that point of time when you wrote this.

Split, fragmented, pierced and ALONE.

I like your expressiveness.

To some, they may be just words written, one after the other, the feelings, making no sense. But to me they make sense. Because I write like that too sometimes. I think it just gives more expression to one's feelings.

You wrote about your journey from love to its end.

Liked your way of expression - different.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,

First of all, let me applaud your poem for the concept and the content.

You have written well.

I liked your vivid imagination and your words.

Some suggestions:
1) use of punctuations - period is missing from your poem.
2) some lines don't flow so well. Like-

i) As if the world was ours for the "taking".

The word "time" sounds better to me.

ii) A love so strong, pure and "enduring"

How about using the word 'true'?

iii) And it will end as if it never "even" started

the word 'even' can be eliminated here.

These are just my suggestions. Please do what you deem best.


Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Afterglow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Personally, I'm not too fond of poems that end before I begin to imagine... *Wink*

But you have done the best that can be done in a bite size poem. I really appreciate that.

The second stanza is especially touching... beautiful!!!

"The glow of you lives on in my heart".... ohhh, I can feel that feeling within me, as I read the words. Awesome!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of ...and Fred.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)

What a beautiful little poem, Ken.

I was lost in the memories of yester years while reading the poem.

Very touching.

Wondering who Fred was, my mind was on the verge of sadness... thinking pessimistically. Gladly, I found out it was a teddy bear and of course so, after all, it was a 5 year old girl... *Bigsmile*

Loved the poem.. very touching.. and sweet.

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Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Cherish  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
OMG, Ken!!

I was speechless when I saw the picture and knowing not, what preceeded, I just started reading with an open mind.

Glad I did, 'coz the message touched my heart and soul.

Oh, how true... the nature loves and cherishes.. I have always found the feeling of it, within me!

I especially loved the last stanza, which moved me to tears... the feeling of belonging.. ohh, how I miss it. I resolve right now, to give a hug to a tree next time I venture out into the wilderness..

Thank you for giving me the chance to read your words and feel.... I'm blessed each time.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Bindings  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm back at reviewing!!

Soulful, touching and heart-warming is how I would describe this poem...

You've put into words such an amazing experience, and succeeded beautifully at it.

I can only imagine how difficult it is to put into words such a big step in life and that too, being a guy..but I will give it to you, you have proven yourself to be a master at it. *Smile*

I especially love this line "Then came the special moment – in pain we both were born." Ohh, how wonderfully expressed!!

In all, astounding!

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Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Realization  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ken,

I am simply awestruck!! Your poem has inspired me to write, yet again. It's been a long time since I wrote anything. But this poem of yours has made me heart bleed, for I have been so away from something I love so much, writing poetry. Somewhere, somehow, your poem strikes me as something that I either have or can pen down. I don't know if this makes any sense to you. But oh dear, thank you!!!

Well, getting down to the review.

You put pictures in your poems which helps me imagine- vivid and clear. *Thumbsup*

Your poem has a rhyming scheme, which seems so effortless and sounds so beautiful when you read it out, the words just roll off my tongue. *Thumbsup*

Your words, so mesmerizing, so beautiful, strike a chord with my heart. Unbelievable!

I could feel the passion and later the sadness that erupted of the poet's heart when she remembered it was all a thing of the past. Ohhh!!


In short, Loved the poem, and especially the effect it had on me.

Cheers!
Christina

Cheers!
Christina

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In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ken,

I owe you lots and lots and lots of reviews. Really sorry for the delay. Personal stuff has been catching up with me.

So let me start with 5 poetry reviews you won in
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First Impressions:
 I ventured in as I liked the title. Simple yet explanatory in itself.

Rhythm and rhyme:
 Perfect. I could not find any fault, not that I was looking for it, anyway. But the words just flew off my tongue.... in a sing song pattern.

What I liked the most:
The words.... Awesome!! Heart tugging! Beautiful. Straight from the heart, felt and pained...
Ohh, I was taken in by their sad beauty. I could identify with them and feel what you must have felt while writing it.
Simply amazing!!

In all:
Loved the poem. It touched my heart, made me think, stayed in my mind till long after. What else one can hope from a poem. Fantabulous!!

Cheers!
Christina

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey Magoo,

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I am here to review you as a Rising Star member to member review.

First things first:

I adored your poem. It is AWESOME!!


Concept:

The concept is amazing. Very unique and innovative.


Content:

The content seemed a little bewildering to me, but only till I read some more into the poem.


What I liked the most:

The thought that went behind this poem.. ohh so magnificient.

The comparison you have drawn... weather and real life.

The many fold interpretations one can derive from it.


Last thoughts:

I liked the poem immensely. However, a few changes here and there can help make it even better. I do not know what 'coot' means. The first line can be improved a bit. Some other adjectives instead of beautiful and wonderful, to give the poem as wonderful a start as it is inside.


Cheers!
Christina

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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)



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First Impressions:

The title interested me and I walked in.


Concept:

Innovative


Content:

A poetry form Senryu, I am not familiar with. It's so short! I wonder how can one do justice to a poem with such a short form. It apalls me!


What I liked the most:

The way in which you finished the poem within three lines!!! I can never ever think of doing it.

Great visuals! I can see the cat extending her limbs! Wow!


Suggestions:

Are there some rules regarding capitalization and punctuation in the poem form? I wonder at the lack of it.



Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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First Impressions:

I entered for some mystery and mush.


Concept:

Lovely. Not exactly unique but brought out in a different manner.


Content:

Well brought out. Explained and elaborated at its best.


What I liked the most:

Your words! They are pure magic. I could feel the poetry in your words as they flew off my tongue slowly and smoothly.

I adored the visuals. Oh! Beautiful! Out of this world!


Suggestions:

I had a little trouble understanding the following line. Do you want to change anything about it?

"He opened a doorway to normal and introduced a taste of stability where before there was but the instability of a volatile relationship."


"Sometimes they’d discuss plans for the house, vacations, the kids, but most often just sip their coffee in comfortable silence while [the] THEY watched the birds leave their nests as they heralded the dawn. "

I also wonder about the tense you use in here- "George sips..."

But then its use becomes clear when I try to see how you differentiate past from the present.


In all, a beautiful, touching story.

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Desiring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A short sweet poem.

I personally feel forms restrict a lot. But you have done a good job with so few words.

Summarized love. *Smile*

It's beautiful!

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of The Honeymoon  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Horrifying!!

What a deadly concept!!

You have planned the poem well.

The character of the bride nicely etched out.

The concept is unique.

In all, a nice imaginative one there.

Cheers!
Christina

P.S. This review is as an apology for the late delivery of your package.

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of The Storms  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh my!!

This is a very dreadful, painful poem.

Heart rending!!

The form is confusing to me, but then I hardly know about forms!

The depth and intensity... ohh!!

The imagery your words draw are powerful.. making me SEE it all.

Suggestions: 2nd stanza. 5th line.. typing mistake.. lightning.

In all, a striking poem that leaves its impact much longer after it is read.

Beautiful!!

P.S. the last of your win from Sisco's auction.

I enjoyed my short trip to your port.

Since it took so long for me to reach here, I may do a few extra reviews soon.

Cheers!
Christina

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