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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An emotional, moving poem.

Short but it says a lot more.

It is heart touching and it makes me feel the depth of sorrow and anguish that the poet is experiencing.

In all, a powerful, deep poem.


P.S. Second review from your win

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Eyes  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

A very ghostly poem indeed.

I see those black eyes staring into my soul. Eerie!

I am not very familiar with the form but I believe it is very difficult.

Writing and expressing in such few words.. a difficult task indeed.

You have done a good job with it though it raises many questions in my mind and I wish the poem had continued.

The imagery you used with your words is beautiful. *Delight*

In all, liked it. *Bigsmile*


P.S. first review for Sisco's good deed auction.

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Two Wise Women  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Prof Moriarty.

I am not very experienced in writing stories. So what follows below is only my personal opinion. Please take from it what you feel useful and discard the rest.

First impressions:
The title is interesting.

Concept:
Well thought out. Dramatic

Content:
Emotional. Touching.

What I liked the most:

The way you have dealt with the concept: very sensitively. Brought it out nicely, in an elaborate manner, making one see the persona of each individual, as if knowing them intimately.

Suggestions:

Some minor suggestions as below.


Sid smiled at Linda when he saw her enter [his] THE study, holding a mug.

[He felt pleased when she did not leave; instead balanced herself against the edge of the table and gazed at him with affection.] HE FELT PLEASED THAT INSTEAD OF LEAVING, SHE BALANCED HERSELF AGAINST THE TABLE'S EDGE AND GAZED AFFECTIONATELY AT HIM.

“You look worried, Sid. IS anything the matter?”

While she pondered over his quandary, he settled back to admire her sensuous face, expressive eyes and glowing black skin[. H]er presence always pleased him.


But why? I don’t owe anything to Bishnupur. It [is] hasn’t played any role in my academic or professional success.

He had studied in the village primary school after which his family[,] who were wealthy landowners had sent him to Calcutta city in pursuit of higher studies.

“Dad.”, Beth’s voice interrupted his trip down memory lane.

I went back to America. [To never return] NEVER TO RETURN,” he announced.

“I think so. Tomorrow is the school inauguration. I wish you were HERE with me,” he answered.


“Me too,” he said, before hanging up.

SOME KIND OF PAUSE IN BETWEEN.

The convoy crossed a long bridge.


[Finally, they stopped outside a magnificent mansion.] A LITTLE MORE ABOUT THE GANGES, MAY BE. IT IS TOO SHORT. EITHER DESCRIBE OR OMIT COMPLETELY.


“Forgive me, son,” said his father, when he [got] MUSTERED UP the courage to hug him.

“What will these poor people [day] DO when the rains fail,” she asked, smiling at a group of women who were sitting outside their mud huts, a stark contrast to the magnificent house where she stayed.



In all, a nice story.

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Marsha Musselman

I am here to give you 5 poetry reviews as the door prize you won in WDC C.A.T.S Raffle. This is the second.

These are my personal views. Please take what you agree with and discard the rest.

A nice limerick there. I know it's not easy to write and one as long as this, is definitely very difficult. Kudos to you for doing a great job with it. Especially writing fact, whoa, unbelieveable! Amazing!

I had few laughs, which is what a limerick is all about.

A great start! Way to go!

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Busted  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am here to give you my personal opinions for your short story.


First Impressions:
I came in to check out the comedy. *Smile*


Concept:
Unique, new and innovative.


Content:
Amazing! Loved it.


What I liked the most:
The humor!!!! Wow!

I laughed so much, especially the climax is too good. Bravo!

The story is well weaved. Descriptions help one see visuals.

The feelings of the characters are nicely expressed.


In all, adored it!

Way to go!

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina
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Review of I Stand Alone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful poem, Connie.

I loved the words as well as the visuals.

It talk of nature, it talks of self.. it mingles the two amazingly well.

I especially loved the second last and third last stanza.. mesmerizing!

Awesome poem!

P.S. Belated Happy Birthday, Connie. I am sorry I could not wish you on your birthday. I have been extremely busy. I hope it went well.

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful poem on love..and that too of a special kind.. *Bigsmile*

I wonder how you too wrote it together??

But it is lovely...doesn't seem like two people have contributed..its whole..in itself.

A poem that makes me feel the goodness of love..ahh!!!

So, dear here ends your mysterious reviews...I will be awaiting your reply for the GPs/awardicon.

I had a great time in your port. Any suggestions regarding my reviewing may please be sent to my inbox. *Smile*

Take care.

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Follow Your Heart  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Once again, a lovely one, Sherri!

The message/ concept is so profound.

The manner in which it is presented it easy to read, touches the heart, impacts in just the right way.

Rhyme and flow is lovely.

In all, yet again a perfect poem that helds a beautiful message for one and all..

I especially adored the second stanza!! *Bigsmile*

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Woah!!!!!!! I love this one!! Adore it actually!!!

Its simply so beautiful!! In its meaning, its concept, its words, rhyme, flow!! Perfect!!!


WIth simplicity and beauty you given out the profound message so nicely!! *Delight* It's awesome!

I would want to give this an awardicon rather than the GPs I was planning to send to you. Will that be alright with you?? Let me know, please.

In all, love it..*Delight* It's beautiful!

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a lovely poem, Sherri. Loved and enjoyed it!

Your words made me see great visuals and I loved..."the falling masses of icy sleet and snow."..made me shiver with cold!! *Smile*

Beautiful concept, nice imagery and well-done rhyme.

In all, loved it!!!!! *Bigsmile*

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of FEELINGS  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, I like the concept of your poem. It talks about feelings..deep feelings..that hurt.

When i started reading, I was confused about the first line, and read it three times, before having a little idea of what you wanted to say. I am not very familiar with that way of saying it though.

The last two lines of first stanza became clear to me after I reread the whole poem. It made sense then. But in the beginning it was a little hard for me to understand, personally.

The next two stanzas were simple enough for my understanding, and I could relate to it and understand and empathize with the feelings depicted.

I guess when you started writing you were full of anger and hurt, so the feelings came out very strong and as you went ahead, due to writing it down and letting it out, they became more somber and coherent for me to understand.

These are my peronal opinions and feelings and may be very different from another reader.

In all, I liked the poem. what I like about your poems is the simplicity with which they are written and they are direct and straight from the heart.

Ciao till the next review. *Wink*

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of FOR YOU ALWAYS  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
So here starts you Mysterious package!! *Delight*

I am glad to be in your port yet again, Sherri. It's a privelege.

Loved the poem.

It's heartfelt, real and touching.

Beautiful expressions simply expressed, straight from the heart... *Smile*

I absolutely adored the expression.. our hearts are joined like sand to sea..how beautiful..I loved the vivid imagery that came to mind and the metaphor that you have found... I plan on using this in one of my poems, if you allow me.. *Bigsmile*

In all, a lovely poem for a loved one, with feelings galore, from deep within.

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A wonderful beginning to a touching, heartfelt story.

I must applaud your efforts for engrossing the reader in the first chapter, which is not easy but crucial for the story.

Being a student of clinical psychology, I can understand the pain the writer is going through and feel empathy and sensitivity for her.

The subject is sensitive and you have dealt well with it, to start with.

In all, makes for an interesting and engrossing read.

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful personal observations, must say!

From loneliness, pain....to moments of joy and relief...relaxation..ahh!

I especially loved the description of the field of daisies..It was as if I was there...smeeling the scent as daisies stroked my face..ohh...amazingly beautiful!

Loved your way of expression. It talks to each of my senses as they awake from deep slumber.. *Smile*

I have enjoyed my visit to yout port immensely, Shannon. Just as I did some time back.. I remember being here once in the past and loving it. I am glad to have found another way into your port..you are really good at expressing..I wish you would write more poems so that when I visit again, I get another chance to revoke my senses.

This is the last of your reviews. I hope they were worth the win. Any suggestions regarding the reviews and their improvement is welcome in my inbox anytime. *Smile*

Cheers!
Christina

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Christina


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Review of U.A. Flight 93  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*sigh* that is all I can gesture.

My heart feels heavy...I think it has broken..the courage of those people is exemplary..but the thought...ohh.

I feel drained of emotions when I think of the attackers..and eyes fill with tears when I think of people who lost their lives.

I believe poetry then is one of the expressions to express one's rage, lost hope and cries.

Thank you for reminding...that they lost their lives while trying to save others...such great souls do exist..a marvel indeed!


Write on!

Christina

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely poem, indeed.

Such heart-felt emotions and sensitivity...it filled my heart with love and my eyes with a tear..

Your words are so true.. in our lives, sometimes we get so busy that we forget our loved ones and doing these little things.

Thank you for the lovely reminder..because as you would see..I have been keeping pretty busy and it's time I surprise some loved ones. *Smile*

In all, loved the poem for its concept, presentation style, use of apt words, rhyme and flow.

Cheers!
Christina

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Christina

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Review of Seasons  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Lovely poem there suffusing seasons...and companionship..so beautifully! *Smile*

Love the visuals your words form in front of my eyes...the beautiful nature..ah!

From spring to summer to winter..it is a nice journey..

And oh yes, what better season than winter for two to become one. *Wink*

In all, I liked the poem.


P.S. This is second review from your win in Birthday Raffle.

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Closer  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
God!! This is painful...shattering..numbing..ohh the pain...

I could almost visualize the lady's life that was flashing past her eyes..all that could be..and all that wasn't...

You have expressed the pain in words so clear..that I feel it..

In all, a well-written poem, expressed beautifully.


This review is first of your five poetry reviews win from Birthday Raffle/Auction.

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Finding Love  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I believe this form would have been really difficult to write. I especially can't write in iambic pentameter. It is really difficult.

However, I must applaud your efforts for choosing this form to write in. It speaks of your courage and challenging nature.

Your concept is new and worth paying attention to.

It talks to me of finding love and then realising it never existed....painful...ohh..shattering..

I would love to bring about a few changes in the poem but the poem's form poses a lot of restrictions, so I will let it be.

You have done well with the form.

Cheers!
Christina


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Christina

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!

What a touching, heartfelt poem. I am almost moved to tears. Though I am not a mother, there are so many things I am attached to, which are no longer in use, but they hold a special place in my heart for the memories attached to someone...ohh..i can completely identify with your words.

Beautiful poem. Loved it!

Cheers!
Christina
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Review of On Eagle Wings  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I feel speechless....pained and sad... I really fall short of words..the tragedy that befell you and your family is hard to imagine.

I am so sorry.

The words that come out of you in the form of a poem say a lot... the pain and the sorrow.. the hollow is deep and impossible to fill..

I just hope you write some more about your feelings..it is always good to pen it down.

Take care.

Christina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a sweet and humble poem.

And great to read as Christmas approaches..the faith so strong.. *Smile*

A fulfilling and lovely poem.

Oh yes, the gift is great and that too for free...Oh, thank you Lord!!

*Snowman*

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Christmas  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem there. Lovely rhyme..works for me..the flow is nice too.

Makes for a good read as Christmas approaches. So true and real as far as He is concerned. Always there and near to hear one's pleas and give and forgive. I think it would work as a nice Christmas Carol. *Smile*

However, the lack of punctuation marks hinders my reading.

Though, I am confused a little by the "I" in there..who does it refer to..?? are the "He" and the "I" the same?? Can you avoid using two terms, it would help not confuse the reader.

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Christina

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a beautiful poem, Kings. I loved it.

It speaks so much..not just mere words..the feeling one feels..the gratitude and the dilemma that one undergoes in thinking of what to offer Him...Ohh

The rhyme is perfect, the flow...ohh..it just sang off my lips..

I smiled someplace, thought at another..even I could not think of a better gift, you know..

Beautiful and mesmerizing poem. No grammatical mistakes nor any suggestions for this perfect piece..the gift to Him!!

Absolutely adored it!

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem is nice and heartfelt. Its painful and touching as two lovers part ways filled with sorrow on the parting.

You have great way with words and especially rhyme. It seems to flow effortlessly out of your pen and that, going by me, is a wonderful feat as that is something that does not com easily to me. So, bravo to you!

A few suggestions-

I am very glad for the use of punctuation marks in this one. It helps to make a quicker and in-depth read easily but I wonder where the apostrophes went?

First stanza, last line- "show"

Second stanza, last line and fourth stanza, second line- "love's"

Second last stanza, firsta nd second line- "heaven's"

Cheers!
Christina

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