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Review of MY HEART  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful poem, Sherri.

It's so touching, and beautiful and so true to the core as far as I have known you in this brief time. *Smile*

It's straight from the heart about your heart and I liked it dear.. the poem as well as your heart.

Especially the last stanza, I absolutely adored.. how true and mesmerizing!!

Heart always conceals at first but with love and care, it opens up to a few loved ones and reveals secrets that lay hidden within the deep recesses of the heart..just as your poem signifies.

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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well, I must say you have a very novel and unique and creative concept. I loved it..very unpredictable but very real.

At the same time, I must say that my idea of a short story is not this. This almost seems like a rough draft for a story and not the real thing. If it is a rough draft and you are thinking of expanding it, I would suggest go for it and let me know when you are done. I would love to read the final version.

The story as of now, lacks full sentences, many details. I had to read few liens thrice to understand what happened. And that seriously takes away of all the fun out of a good story.

All the best!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a fulfilling poem..oen of submission to Lord and gaining of peace..ah!!

What beautiful feelings go through me as I savor the poem. It almost feels like I have attained peace for myself. *Smile* Thank you for the amazing feelings.

Your poem is very real and true to the core. I guess you have experienced it for yourself.

Though, I think the poem would be more easier to read if the start of a sentence and needed words are capitalized instead of all. That helps one understand where one sentence ends and other starts, go with the flow and be more immersed in the poem and its meaning.

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Review of All That Remains  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked your poem. *Smile*

It is painful..yet so heart felt, seemingly straight from the heart...so touching..it brought tears to my eyes.

Though, one thing I am left wondering.. what exactly do you mean by "with the toss of a toothbrush". You use it quite a few times but I am really unable to understand its meaning. Can you please clarify?

I can feel the gap that is left behind by the one who left..a never-filling, empty hole..

However, I think that the poem would look and feel better if parted into a few stanzas instead of a long one..What do you think?

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Rated: E | (4.0)
A nice but frightful poem. I like the way you scare *Smile* with sounds and feelings unlike something scary that is really to be seen..very subtle way, that!! *Smile*

I loved the last lien fo second stanza, and last two lines of the last stanza! Amazing!! The ending is beautiful and precise.

A few suggestions I would like to make-

First stanza, second line- "Wrapped up" sounds better to the ears and also fits in the with the number of syllables in other lines of the stanza.

Second stanza, second line- after "shutters bang", O think there should be a comma.

Third line, third stanza. "All my mind" doesn't sound right. Can you think of editing the line a bit?

In all, I liked it!! Just needs a bit editing.

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Christina

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Review of Blackbird  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
What a painful, shameful poem..

It makes me ponder and think..ohh..the nature of men..jealousy rules.

I liked the way it started and even smiled amusedly on reading the word 'sir' *Smile*

But the last two lines of the first stanza, I read thrice, but could not grasp the meaning.... "of no consequence,
Of no criticism." Are you trying to say that at the blackbird's place there is no criticism? What then does consequence signify here? Can you please clarify?

Depper into the poem, I sat back and was amazed at the second stanza, almost signifying your deep-rooted harsh feelings about the oposite sex perhaps from past experience.

The last stanza was horrifying, totally unpredictable and I nearly cried out.

You do well in expressing feelings..

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of LOVE IS...  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful prose, Maria..

Such profound feelings regarding love..

So true, so real, making one wonder and look at love in a different light.

Seen from different perspective, love's plethora widens.

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This is a very touching, heart-felt, painful poem.

I can very well identify with this as I, myself, work in a psychiatric hospital. What you have written here seems as familiar as my right hand.

I feel so many of the feelings you describe.

It's very heart-rending...sorrowful.

The poem tells a heart felt story about how mentally challenged see us..and what emotions they brings about in us.

Well expressed..

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Christina

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Review of The Hitchhiker  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ha! Ha! This is really funny. It is nostalgic, taking me to time gone by.. memories revived and cherished and the nature of things today comtemplated and lamented upon.

I loved the vivid imagery your words bring to mind. It is real yet funny at the same time.

The "meanwhile" bit is awesome. It is almost like a movie when the camera shifts from one angle to another.

At first, though, I was taken aback by the different break of lines and the absence of punctuation marks, I gradually felt that it served its purpose.

Well-written.

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Christina

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Review of Angel of Destiny  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Initial Impressions:

I was taken in by the suprisingly beautiful description with which the poem starts.


Concept:

Well- imagined..


Content;

As you say, raw emotions..raw words..combining into a poem.


What I liked:

I liked the way it starts.. I can almost See the beauty. The concept is well built and nice. I like the vivid imagery reflecting through your words.


What, according to me, may be improved:

The lack of punctuation marks distracted me.

Fourth stanza, fourth line. I don;t understand the use of word 'does'. Is it a question? If yes, why?

Fifth stanza..there is too much of "her". you can remove the last two ones. they aren're required.

Sixth stanza, first line. did you mean "pleads"? Also, try and find a synonym for 'soothing', and not repeat the same word.

Seventh stanza. I believe "only for him' sounds better.



Liked the second last stanza. It creeps in mystery into the plot.

Cheers!
Christina

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Review of Problems  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very sound advice from someone who has been through it all, suffered and come to the sane world yet again...I hope addicts read this and take the lesson, the way you have, with determination and your inner power to lead the way. *Smile*

Your words are true to the core and end up setting a chilling view to the mind.

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Christina

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Review of Wasting Away  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, not just through mere words, you have proved it, my dear.

Past is gone and future lies ahead. You have taken the right path and it will take you to greater heights.

I love the way you express yourself so simply, the rhyme seeming effortless..yet it comes out as magnificient. *Smile* Awesome!

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Christina

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Review of Win or Lose?  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Woah, Kristi! This is awesome!

I love the way you have written this..everything from the words to the concept to the rhyme and the flow and the word 'choice' in italics. It is beautiful.

It is soul-moving, touching and painful all at the same time. You have expressed your thoughts and feelings amazingly mesmerizingly.

One suggestion: I think, in third stanza, last line, a comma should be there after "your soul". However, that is my personal opinion. Please go by your instinct.

Loved the poem.
Way to go!!

Cheers!
Christina

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Well, this one is really serious..wondering what will happen..

The rhyme and flow is good. I like the way you have expressed your thoughts and feelings...the tense situation and the confused state of mind.

The only thing I wish is that it didn't end so soon..


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Christina

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Rated: E | (5.0)
*sigh* your poem makes me nostalgic and teary-eyed as I remember my own grandparents...ohh..

I miss them so..your poem so truly reflects what goes on in one's life and how people are missed later on..

The only thing I personally could not get comfortable with were the capitalization of every first word of a sentence and less use of punctuation marks.

In all, I like your genuine and expressed emotions..flowing out of your heart.

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Review of Who Me???  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved your poem.

The flow and rhyme is so great, that I almost ended up singing it. *Bigsmile* LOL!!

A great description of yourself, so true...that is exactly what we end up doing..when someone lauds and applauds us, we tend to us ask "who me?" *Delight*

What a great way to choose your handle, awesome!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved your poem. It reminded me of my beloved and our feelings for each other.

The way you express love is so beautiful, genuine and real, that I know you have felt it for yourself.

And yes, I have to say you have a great attention span to write long sentences. At the same time, let me admit I have a very short attention span and in order to understand, I have to read your lines twice at least.

In all, I love the way you have written this poem.

Way to go!

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Christina

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm.. I liked the concept...very innovative and creative.

It is hillarious too.

What did not appeal to me personally were the long sentences and the capitalization of every first word of the sentence.

I liked your description however. It helped in my imagery and served a nice purpose.

In all, a nice poem but for me, it would do better if it is easy to comprehend and either uses small sentences or more punctuations.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is really funny. I loved it.

It is one hell of a good story..what innovativeness.. I wonder if a person like this exists though..wait don't tell me he does.. why the 'non-fiction' on the story..God!! oh ok..I'm sorry..but.. would you really mind posting the photo *Delight*

Loved ti..wonderful...hillarious.

Write on!

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Christina

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow!! Where shall I start from. This was very interesting, engrossing and nice. However, I must say my idea and expectation of a fairy tale was ruined by the hard- hitting truth in the end. But then that is what real life is all about! Ah!!

You have really done a nice work with the prompt. I liked the content. It is real and I can feel it with your descriptions and flow. *Smile*

I loved your way of expressing, especially this..it made me laugh *Laugh*

"I was more than happy to see them leave since Cynthia was fragrant in her own way and was overdue for a diaper change."


A few suggestions:

"This was despite the fact she had repeatedly told me if she had it to do over again,"
I guess you mean "if she had to do it over again"?


There suddenly was a commotion at the back door, and I hurried to return to the kitchen. Coming inside, covered in the snow that was falling more heavily by now, were my step sister, Beth. With her were her husband, Joseph, and their three children.

I would suggest the following:
There WAS suddenly a commotion at the back door, and I hurried to return to the kitchen. Coming..., WAS my step sister, Beth.

"Roger was carrying the youngest, a screaming baby boy, since Janet was pregnant with their eighth and last child."
I did not really understand the bit about the "last" child as it broke the flow, taking me from past to the present, which is when you know that it was their last child. I would suggest removing that bit of extra information.

I knew the minute we were about to start our afternoon feast when I heard, “Judith, come help bring out the vegetables.”

I somehow can't understand this line. Where does the "when" fit in?

In all, I liked the story..non fiction one..I love the picture..though I am saddned with the REAL conclusion :(

Write on!

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Christina

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Review of Alone  
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Woah!! It is beautiful, Jyo.

You express feelings so vividly, so REAlly..that it is almost as if one feels the pain of the sufferer.. heart-breaking and painful..

The emotions within the poet get through so clearly and visibly that there is no moment of doubt and an empathy that goes out..to reach and hold.

I especially loved the last line. To me, it talks of hope and optimism.

Bravo!
A job well done!

Write on!

Cheers!
Christina

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I like the way it starts..with the sunset..I can almost see it.

You express feelings so tenderly, so realistically..that I can FEEL it.. and that is a tremendous feat for a poet!

The form and flow is nice.

The intermingling of the surroundings, nature with emotions is done really well.

I simply adore the last line...so true..very well said!

Write on!

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Review of Bound By Love  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I loved the poem..adored it completely.

The concept..the content..the emotions reflected..the words..everything is beautiful..

Heartfelt, deep, feel'ful..

Makes me feel content...fulfilled...i just can't explain in words what your poem makes me feel like...its beyond words..

It talks to me of unconditional love...the only thing that mattered.

Thank you for the lovely read.

Write on!

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Review of Love Scars  
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Ohh...painful..hurting..deep.

Love found and love lost bitterly..


Words straight from the heart talking of the pain it went through...


Write on!

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Review of His Hand in Mine  
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Wow!!...I am speechless, teary-eyed, feeling "full" of feelings...sadness and pain overpowering..

You have so delicately and in a heart felt way gathered how a fatherless child feels...dreams..and desires..

I love the image too..

And I especially adore the following lines..they speak to me..

"They thought I was lucky,
My sadness unseen."

"But I never knew my dad,
Or felt the warmth of his hand,"

"I have a young son now,
His hand held in mine."

Very beautiful!!

Thank you for the lovely read.

I had a great time in your port. Loved your poetry.

Keep writing!!

Write on!

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