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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Eclipse's Change Part One: It Begins
by RBM5


Clarity, does the title describe this story?: Seems to be a good title for this story.

Style: Fanfiction, sci-fi

Genres, are 3 listed?Fanfiction, Entertainment, Fantasy

Plot:
A strong storyline with great potential for a longer work.
Eclipse transforms to a female and mother figure that his race needed to survive.

Characters:Eclipse

Structured easy for the reader?Structured with long paragraphs and long sentences, both are intimidating for potential readers.


Any suggestions? Consider breaking the paragraphs down to shorter versions as well as some of the long sentences . This will make it less intimidating for the browser looking for something to read.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: FOUR QUESTIONS ABOUT GOD--an article by Dr M C Gupta

Does the title describe story? The title is a good description of this article.

What style? Opinion, informative article.

Are there three genre listings? Opinion, Scientific, Philosophy

My favorite line: -- God has given us intellect and discretion and freedom to use or not to use that intellect.--

This is only one opinion: This is an interesting article. Well written. A good idea for the question and answer style.

Informative with good examples for the readers to relate too.

Dr M C Gupta, thank you for sharing this interesting article.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking down the long paragraphs to make it less intimidating for a potential reader.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:BRAIN WAVES--award winner: by Dr M C Gupta

Clarity: The title describes this poem well.

Style: Scientific, spiritual poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and worded poem. A good structure that helps the flow and tone of this work.

This poem brings up interesting questions.
A strong poem that gets the reader's mind thinking.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Pippin's Milk Run by:Coffeebean


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title works well.

Style: Children's fantasy

Genres, are 3 listed?Children's, Other: Listing 3 genres will make your work available for more browsers.

This is only one opinion: Very well structured children's story about a family of cats, mom and three kittens. Pippin is one of the kittens talk to his mom into letting him go to the store.

On the way he meets his friend Bully who goes with him to the store. At the store they run into Lily who has lost her toy they help her find it.

Coffeebean, this is a very nice story. The children's book market has changed a lot through the years, in today's fast pace society the readers like short with a lot of pictures for children's books.
I like this story. You might consider more action to hold the readers attention. Some years ago this would be a good fit for a children's book.

A good story greatly structured making it easy to read. Good characters and descriptions with good dialog. Well done. Thanks for sharing this, it is a good read.

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Review of Final Prey  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Final Prey by the.shay 1


Clarity, does the title describe this story?: A good title but it doesn't really describe what the story is about so good.

Style: Folklore thriller

Genres, are 3 listed?Thriller/Suspense Listing three genres helps more browsers to find your story.

Plot: Jim is a long time employee of the dollar store. He is so use to his routine that he don't even notice for a while that the store has been robbed and is littered with bodies.

A well written and described story with action and suspense. Strong characters, well written dialog.
The story flows well and held this reader's attention good from start to end.
Thanks for sharing this strong story, this reader has enjoyed it.

Characters:Jim, the dollar store employee.
The old man with mud under his fingernails. A regular customer.
The thief that robs the store and kills the customer. Turns out to be a girl wearing black leather and a motorcycle helmet with the visor down.


Structured easy for the reader?The story is structured well, easy to read.


Any suggestions?A good proof read to correct typos(I seen at least a couple).
Good descriptions, a few could be edited without hurting the story. This would make it a bit shorter which is how most of today's readers like it.

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Review of Black Cats  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
My impressions of: Black Cats by Princess Megan Rose.

Hey Megan, this newsletter came up while random reviewing. I have enjoyed reading this greatly detailed newsletter. Thanks for all you do for the WDC community. Always professional, entertaining top shelf writing.



Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title describes this story great.

Style: Newsletter.

Genres, are 3 listed?Animal, Holiday, Supernatural. Good genre's to list.

Plot:I love history, it was a joy to see some cat history. A lot of people are still suppositious of Black Cats ( Krazzzeeey ).
Nice idea listing some famous cats.

Your descriptions of Bella are so good I can see her.

Hey Angel. Maxi, Molly and Goldie sound like great companions. Well told story about them and Roger.
I hope none had to be arrested and sent to Doom Town.

I think any cat owner will relate to this. We have three cats, Mutton is black with a white belly and feet. TomTom is tortoise shell, she is the same age as Mutton. (7years). JoJo is Siamese, we have her 17 years. All three are spoiled, JoJo is the hunter. She loves to show-off her kills, leaving a mess of blood and guts.
Thank you both for this awesome read> :)




Structured easy for the reader?A good structure, easy to read. Nice use of colors.
Awesome image's that anyone would have to like.




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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Anonymous, page 195 & 196



What style? Summary, poetic.

Are there three genre listings? Mystery, Young Adult, Drama

My favorite line: -- Us against the world.--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written and very unique summary. Peace, a great start.
Indeed it does seem like its us against the world at times.
Trying to make a difference. Trying to be us. Both strong phrases that you have used well in this work.
A powerful page to make me start philosophizing. Thank you for sharing this work, it is a joy to read.

Often most of us do get in such a hurry that we miss and overlook many things. Next thing you know its all in the past, as we look back it becomes clear that we learn from our mistakes. Molding us into the person we become. Then we seem to make sense out of it.

If I had to make the suggestion:

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Advice for an electrician

Clarity: Great title for this poem.
Style: Romance, free verse

My 2 cents is only one opinion:I like this poem, well being an electrician
I would have to like it. I never thought about comparing electrical work to romance, a good idea.
I do know about the static hair-do, for me that's when you get a good jolt. The sun burst's glare I have seen.
A well written poem, worded good with a bit of humor.
Thanks for sharing this good read.


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Review of Passageways  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Passageways

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Flash fiction.

Are there three genre listings? Contest entry

My favorite line: --He floated through the passageway, and now he knew it was him in the dream, not the revolution.--

This is only one opinion: A well written contest entry story. Good opening with a bit of mystery.
A good plot with strong characters. Good descriptions' I like that Terrano decided to let the woman go.
A nice ending with the passageway and light, just enough to make the reader want to know more.
Thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: THE CAR WAS WHERE THEY WENT

Does the title describe story? The title works for this chapter.

What style? Action/adventure, sci-fi

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Detective, Sci-fi

My Favorite line: --The quiet hung like a fly in a spider’s web,--

This is only one opinion: A good story-line full of action and mystery.
Good descriptions with a lot of dialog. A lot of the descriptions detail could be edited without taking away from the story. Todays reader's have a short attention span.
Still in rough draft form with some typo's and grammar mistakes. Also some repeated phrases which takes away from the flow a bit.

I like this story and see a lot of potential. It appears that you may have rushed it a little. In need of a proofread and edit.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider keeping the dialog between 3 characters.
Richard, do you have the work read out loud to you? Most writers do this to catch a lot of mistakes easily missed from being so into the work. I know that I have too.
Consider formatting with more spacing to make it easier for the reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: Plot and characters The Resurrection Men

Does the title describe story? A good title for this work.

What style? Outline

Are there three genre listings? Dark, Gothic, Crime/Gangster



This is only one opinion: A good outline for what looks to be everything needed for a classic thriller.
Good plot. Ironic ending having the bodies donated for dissection.
Good chapter outline. I like chapter 3 showing the characters getting careless.
Good characters. Great idea to outline them giving you a chance to know them better.
Thanks for sharing this great outline for what
looks to be a classic, I have enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: How could they simply appear

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Sci-fi adventure.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Detective, Sci-fi

My favorite line: --“I cannot see where it has gone? They jumped the controlling manifold,” Jason said as he had his hands dance across the keyboard. He looked up, “Lost it.”--

This is only one opinion: Richard, I like this action packed story. Well done. Thanks for sharing it, this reader enjoyed it.
A well written sci-fi adventure tale with good description's and strong characters. A good narrative for a longer work or novel.
I like the teleporting theory, this mystery holds the readers attention. Leaving him wanting to know more and turn the page.


If I had to make the suggestion: A good proof read and edit to catch any typos or repeated words is always a good idea.

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Review of Dear Me.  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Dear Me.

Does the title describe story? Great title for this letter.

What style? Letter, memories, sci-fi.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry, Sci-fi, Biographical

My favorite line: -- But only time will tell if I do.--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written, well structured letter, PureSciFi.
I was thinking about entering the dear me contest, after reading this I think you got it won already.
Good childhood memories, in particular the sci-fi visits when you were 16.
It sounds like an awesome screenplay you are working on. Also sounds like you are really busy and using your time wisely and efficiently.
Thank you for sharing this awesome work, it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Of This Prophesy

Does the title describe story? A good title for this work.

What style? Religious, prophesy, preaching

Are there three genre listings? Religious, Community, Spiritual


This is only one opinion: A well written religious interpretation, with prayers.
Informational and educational article with many bible quotes in no certain order.
The Bible is a powerful book, the only book that can be read by everyone and each person can have a separate and different interpretation, without being wrong.
The makings of a good sermon.
Thanks for sharing this article with your interpretations.


If I had to make the suggestion: Todays readers in this fast paced society have a short attention span, liking articles short and to the point. A good edit never hurts.

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Review of Caribbean Silk  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Caribbean Silk

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Free verse poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written poem. I think fishing, maybe with a camera.
This poem takes me to a dream state, where I am fishing but catching everything but fish.

Nicely worded and structured poem. Thank you for sharing this strong poem, I haven't been fishing in a while.
My favorite line: Seahorse salutes
my return to whence I came.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Blaze of Glory

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Action, adventure, western, outline

Are there three genre listings? Western, Crime/Gangster, Action/Adventure

My favorite line: --He trusts no one but family.--

This is only one opinion: Awesome! I love westerns. A great structure for the outline by chapter.
Great character outline, defining strong characters and a few twists that are unexpected.
Great job, held this readers attention well and left him wanting more.
Seems like all is in place to begin this historic adventure.
Thanks for sharing this work, this reader thoroughly enjoyed it.
Great descriptions with strong characters, I cant wait to see more.

If I had to make the suggestion: Always a good idea to proof read and edit to try and catch any typos are flaws.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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My impressions of the poem:A Wayward Romance: Avenue of Style

Clarity: The title works well for this work.
Style: Wayward love poem

My 2 cents is only one opinion: I see a forbiden type love in this poem. A love that exists but is only known to the ones that share it. Love has a power and a mystical hold that sometimes is there and can not be denied. Can not be acknowledged either for reason's of the love.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Chaos: Deathly Beginnings Chapter Two

Does the title describe story? Seems like a good title for this story.

What style? Teen fantasy, drama.

Are there three genre listings? Dark, Fantasy, LGBTQ

My favorite line: -- She always begged Beatrice for therapy, but she always denied it. Beatrice didn’t want her saying too much; her childhood experiences taught her not to trust therapists or counsellors --

This is only one opinion: Well written and nicely structured story.
Good descriptions with strong character's and dialog.
A realistic writing style. Some good twist with the prophesy that keeps the reader alert.

Good ending leaving the reader wanting to know more.
Holds this readers attention well.
Thanks for sharing this interesting story, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: A good proof read and edit wouldn't hurt the story.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}My impressions of: truck and tractor books - Books For Boys

Clarity: The title works well for this outline.

Style: Childrens Books
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My 2 cents is only One opinion:
All six or nicely worded and well structured. Toddlers should love them. My favorite 3 are below.

I like #1. "Tractors help us every day in many ways."
Just some ideas, Consider: "To conclude"
"Tractors help grow our food."

#5 Looks good. I like the structure, especially the scenery's should make for great image's.

#6 Definitely, I think it is my favorite. Consider starting with "Tractors work hard day by day" "In the sun" "In the rain" "Sometimes in the snow"...

Great work as is, tried to throw a couple idea's. Thank you for sharing this great work, I enjoyed it, I'm a toddler at heart. :)



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My impressions of: Grandma McGonagall

Does the title describe story? The title decribes this story fairly.

What style? Childrens fanfiction.

Are there three genre listings? Experience, Fanfiction, Children's

My favorite line: -- It sounded like the tiniest breeze blowing as all opened the wrappers simultaneously --

This is only one opinion: A good idea for this well written and structured story.
Grandma's are among the wisest people in our life.
Great descriptions. Great dialog.
Thanks for sharing this delightful tale.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

My impression of this newsletter: Smart Quotes and Dumb Coding.


Clarity: The title describes the work well.

Genres: Writing, Computers, How-To/Advice

My impression: A well written, informative and educational article.
I had wondered about the quotation marks. Also have wondered about the typewriters keyboard being outdated. I found this to be a very helpful article, thank you.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Harry and Winnie

Does the title describe story? The title works well for this story.

What style? Crime/mystery

Are there three genre listings? Crime/Gangster, Detective, Comedy

This is only one opinion: Well written mystery story. Good descriptions and strong characters.

This story has a good flow. Very realistic sounding story.
Short, simple and to the point the way todays readers like it.
Thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My impressions of: A Prom Night To Remember

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Teen romance, drama

Are there three genre listings? Friendship, Romance/Love, Other

My favorite line: --My nervousness began to subside and instead was replaced by anger.--

This is only one opinion: A good idea for this nicely written story. Great descriptions and strong characters with good dialog.

A lot of emotion can be felt from this work.
Very realistic as if a true story.
A good flow for this story.
Thanks for sharing this drama, a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: A great story, a good edit to shorten a bit would not hurt the story. Todays readers have a short attention span.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: A Letter to Myself

Does the title describe story? A great title.

What style? Resolutions.

Are there three genre listings? Activity, Contest, Contest Entry

My favorite line: --Creativity Unleashed! --

This is only one opinion: Awesome! A well written motivational letter. Adventure ahoy! Kindness makes a splash!
This has got me psyched up. I like it.
Great advice and suggestions. Indeed its going to be an wonderful year.
Thanks for this entertaining letter, I have enjoyed reading it. Happy New year.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Green Mermaid Inn

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Fantasy, adventure, mythological.

Are there three genre listings? Horror/Scary, Mythology.

My favorite line: -- Relative to what?--

This is only one opinion: An awesome adventure/ thriller story. Kept this readers attention well from start to end.
Well written, great descriptions and strong characters.
Great idea for this work, followed by unique original descriptions.
A realistic tone, this story flows well.
Thanks for sharing this awesome story, I enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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