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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of The World Moves on with Laughter

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem which is really a song about life, family and its changes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

The refrain is:

The fallen stay
while the world moves on with laughter.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Each verse is an advance to the floral aspect of continuing family life.

FINAL THOUGHTS:
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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The Root of the Problem

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewern it.. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Alex liberates one of Mrs. Jenkin's pies from her back porch where it is cooling. He of course has to return it.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A well told story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Shaman's Trance  
Review by dblameck (David)
Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Shaman's Trance

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Trance like meditation can be direct and very meaningful. This small listing of thots direct us to seek direction and force.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Expand your vision and thinking. I want to read more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Memorial for those


Review of Dawn Rises Over Battlefields

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

April 25th is the Anzac day of Memorial and Remembrance for those fallen in both wars.

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Review of The Joke's on Me  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Joke's on Me

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple story poem with a humorous ending.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are five verses each of which has four lines. Each of the verse's rhyming schemes is A B C B.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A story of everyday life that makes you smile.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

It brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of There No Smoke Without Fire

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about friendships. It insists that there is nothing more to the relationship. It is purely friends.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Two verses of four lines each. Rhyming scheme of A A B B on each verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I think it is perfect just the way it is written.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of What we do as Mom Sleeps

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Mom is home from work and she needs a nap. As she sleeps the children redo the backyard with a treehouse and extensive changes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are seven verses each with four lines and a rhyming scheme of A B A B.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I like it the way it is. Particularly the lines about fritters and bear claws to refresh the workers.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Plains Twilight  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)



Review of Plains Twilight

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem hi-lighting nature at sunset.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Written in free verse with many descriptive words.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:


i enjoyed this poem but would suggest more information on how the light reflects on the animals and life of the area.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Enjoyable. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Trials of the Romantic Period

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple word search of nine words that is fairly easy to complete.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

All words deal with romantic poetry.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Try it and enjoy.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!


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Review of Homecoming  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Homecoming

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Those who have pets know this experience. The greeting yet a possessive questioning as to why one has been away.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Free verse with the words in italics being the pet's response.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

This poem brought a smile to my face. You should write more things of this type.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of A Simple Love  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of A Simple Love

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem with a strong reflection of the strong love that is shared.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five lines with a rhyming scheme of A B B C C.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more poetry of this calibre.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)



Review of Christmas Solitare

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I was looking at your portfolio and saw this piece had new been rated. So I decided to do a review.
I found it to be an interesting reflective story being with the choosing to make a drastic change at Christmas.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I am unsure how the two different women playing solitaire relate to the decision to go to Hawaii.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of And Then There Was None

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Should I laugh or cry after reading this story. It is such a microcosm of these mixers.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

You are limited because of word count so more short stories about society today.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

I enjoyed this glimpse of life today.
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Review of ODE TO COFFEE  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Ode to Coffee

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Very impressive. Good poetic motion.

POETRY INFORMATION:


A true ode of fourteen lines and the correct rhyming scheme.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Good impressions of the need for that life giving black liquid.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (3.0)



Review of My Trip To Cancun

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

First section of a vacation story to Cancun Mexico.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Details of trip to Cancun including description of the excessive heat.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Give up more detail. Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Tooth Dilemma  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Tooth Dilemma

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A child's delightful expressions and questions when he/she loses a tooth.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Fhree varied rhyming verses.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I thoroughly enjoyed the playfulness of this poem.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)




Review of A Shamrock a Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A young Irish girl teased about her elfin pointed ears. The mother explains the benefits.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The answers the mother gives are more than satisfying.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

keep writing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)




Review of Do-nut Go Breaking My Heart

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A couple in argument over the selection of donuts for their son s birthday.
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PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Unnamed couple argue over which is best at selecting doughnuts.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I really enjoy the back and forth between the couple.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)




Review of Some Times You Can’t Save Them

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I guess it is how a EMT feels when he can't save one of his young passengers.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

An EMT shares a woman's sorrow at the shooting death of her son.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of Death in a Metro Bar

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

An unusual poem with three verses of ten lines with only lines six and seven rhyming.


PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It relates a story of a man bringing guns, a sword and kerosene to a bar and starting a murderous spree.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of I AM OF NO USE

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem which is filled with despair.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Composed of six rhyming couplets.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I was looking for what is causing the depression.
I found it hard to follow.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Starlight Parlor  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Write more. This is a great poem. I want to read more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

This was a pleasant read.

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Review of After midnight  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)



Review of The Tourists

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

What starts out to be a friendly positive community story about building statues in the park and turns into an evil scary story involving killed pets, scared children and eventually the death of a young girl.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Read this story. I am sure you will be enthralled by it.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of The Price of Fame  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The Price of Fame

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Three interesting Limerick poems with very different people and with different locations.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Standard limerick rhyming scheme of A A B B A.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!.

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Review of The Doorman  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)



Review of The Doorman

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A delightful limerick about a doorman to a club.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Rhyming scheme was A A B B A.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

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