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Review of The Bequest  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*LeafG*Review given on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge" *LeafG*


Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "The Bequest" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Great title! It's very thought-provoking and fits your poem well. *Star*

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Your flow and line-to-line transition is good. I'm counting 8 syllables per line, making it flow easily while reading it. Rhythm is good also. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is quite good. I see no spelling or punctuation errors. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I like the addition of the picture. That, along with your words, pull at the familial heartstrings in all of us. My favorite part was the following:

"He took his grandson by the hand
and, in the small copse, patiently,
explained that each tree in the stand
had been planted by his family."

This made me think of my times as a child when I helped my grandpop in his garden. *Heart*

This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done! Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*LeafG*Review given on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge" *LeafG*


Hi Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Early Morning Treats" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I love your title! *Heart* Indeed, what a treat!! *Wink*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
It could just be me but I think the meter might be slightly off in your second stanza. I think it's that third line that's throwing it off. Again, that might just be me.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Excellent word choice that is so vividly expressive! Well done! I think the first line of your last stanza might read a little easier if you add a comma after "finest".

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I felt as though I was drinking my cup of coffee and breathing in the air of a fresh, new day! My favorite part is the following:

"Auburn with purple and pinkish hues,
Beautiful colors all meld.
Scarlet-orange with a splash of blues.
Mother Nature makes the weld."

I can actually picture it! Great job! *Star*

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of I Am  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lilyx* ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "I Am" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This title fits your poem well.

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I think there are a few places where the meter might be off slightly but it doesn't detract from the poem. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Excellent word choice and I don't see any spelling or punctuation errors. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
On a personal level, this poem touched me deeply. I almost died and the feelings/thoughts/emotions I have from that experience are expressed so beautifully in your poem. You will be receiving an awardicon from me shortly! *Wink*

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of Your Last Chance  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Incurable Romantic ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your essay, "Your Last Chance" . Your name, Incurable Romantic, is what drew me to your port in the first place. I am a hopeless romantic myself. This was the first item I read but I will certainly be going through others! *Wink*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This is a very fitting title that fits your essay well. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
You are very descriptive in your writing, which is excellent. It's something we all strive for as writers. You've done it well. I see no spelling or punctuation errors. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was absolutely amazing! While I was reading it, there were several places where I actually got chills. One of those times was this:

"But when I walked in and found her later that night, I was never more relieved and thankful that we'd made saying those "I Love You"s a very important part of our life."

I lost both of my parents when I was in my 20s. When my mom died, I was the one that found her. Almost 6 years later, I still have the occasional nightmare from that.

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of Night's Spell  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kim ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Night's Spell" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is good. I see no spelling errors. Adding some punctuation might help add emphasis.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This is a beautiful poem. I just wish it was longer. I think you have really good thoughts here that you can expand on.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of A Prism  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "A Prism" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is excellent! I don't see any misspellings. Punctuation doesn't apply with this form.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None, it's wonderful just the way it is! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Diamante is such a cool form of poetry. You've done an excellent job with it! I've never tried it but you've certainly inspired me to do so. This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of For you...  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Bigjosh52629 ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "For you..." .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is good. I would suggest adding some punctuation to add impact and emphasis. Also, in the next to the last line "Its" should be "It's".

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a good read. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of A Dark Dream  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi love love ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "A Dark Dream" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is good. There are several errors that I saw. "Peirce" should be "pierce" and "plase" should be "place". Also, the first line of your last stanza, it should be "too" instead of "to".

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a good read. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of Photograph  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi bloodyrose ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Photograph" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A very fitting title for your poem about remembered snapshots of time for a friendship that is no longer.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is good. In your second line, it should be "laughter" as that is also the plural.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
In your 5th stanza, you change tense. The first line is written in past tense but the second line is present tense. I think you probably mean it be past tense so "come" should be "came".

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a good poem. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi crandejr ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Heart of the Storm" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Good word choice. I see no spelling or punctuation errors. Good job! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

I see that you're a newbie. I encourage you to look into some of the awesome newbie groups here at WDC.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi JACE - House Targaryen ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "My Brother's Passing" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A very fitting title.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Excellent word choice. I see no errors.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None. It's perfect.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was such a beautiful poem and I'm sure it was difficult to write. I do hope that it was able to help you. Writing is certainly a fantastic outlet.

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Yellow Rose ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "IT ALL BEGAN WITH A SMILE" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Good word choice. My only suggestion would be to possibly add some punctuation to add emphasis/impact in specific areas. Again, that's just a suggestion.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of Please  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Robert Cloven ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Please" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Short, sweet and to the point! Good job! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Excellent word choice. I saw no spelling or punctuation errors. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. My favorite part is the following:

"Devotion in its clearest form,
if transparent love you're after,
to wash away my worldly woes
by bathing in your laughter."

Wow, that's just amazing! Well done.

I see that you're a newbie to WDC. I encourage you to look into some of the newbie groups - they're awesome!

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of From the ashes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi James A. Osteen Jr. ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "From the ashes" , after seeing it posted on "Invalid Item" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Very good word choice. I saw no spelling or punctuation errors. Great job! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. My favorite part is the following:

"From out of dying embers
of where a fire had burned
a flame is being kindled
from that which I have learned"

That last stanza ends your poem well. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of Wondering Why  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ♥Hooves♥ ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Wondering Why" , after seeing it posted on "Invalid Item" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is excellent. Also, I saw no errors in spelling or punctuation. Great job! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ShiShad ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your article, "Finding The Right Publisher For Me" .

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Your title is why I chose to read/review this item. Good choice!

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Great word choice. I saw no errors at all. Well done!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I've been published in anthologies and would LOVE to someday have my own book of poetry. This article was so helpful in providing insight into your experience and why you chose to publish yours as you did. It's certainly something I'll consider when I get to that point.

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi fyn ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Remember Why I Died...." .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem. It's what drew me to your poem in the first place. Good job!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Excellent word choice! I saw no errors at all. This was very well done! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
There is no possible way to improve upon perfection.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I actually got chills while I was reading this. I had a friend who was a Marine. He was killed in Iraq in 2004 so this absolutely struck a very emotional chord with me. It was very well penned and a wonderful tribute to those who have fought and died for our freedom. Well done! Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

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Review of Stalling Fate  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Mahoney ,
I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Stalling Fate" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Just a few minor tweaks. In your third line, I think "It self" should be "Itself". Also, in the sixth line, "dont" should be "don't".

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

I see that you are a newbie to WDC so I encourage you to check out some of the newbie groups. They're wonderful groups and helped me when I was a newbie.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Review of Writer's Block  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aestival ,
I'm reviewing your essay, "Writer's Block" .

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Oh my! As writers, this is something we all experience sooner or later. It's unfortunate but it happens. You've so eloquently put into words the feelings/thoughts we have while suffering from it.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I saw no errors. This is very well done. *Star*

I see that you're a newbie. I encourage you to look into some of the newbie groups here at WDC.

Thank you so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!!

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Review of My Dreams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi piewhackett1,
I'm reviewing your poem, "My Dreams" .

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Such beautifully sweet sentiments in dreams of the one you love. I'm a hopeless romantic so this really pulled at my heartstrings. Especially your last line, "My heart is broken without you here". Awwwwww!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I don't see any errors. Well done! *Star*

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the great work! WRITE ON!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Daizy May ,
I'm reviewing your poem, "In a Moment's Space" .

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What an awesome poem and every word of it is so very true! I can't pick a favorite part because I loved all of it!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
How can you possibly improve on perfection? I saw absolutely no errors. Well done! *Star*

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the great work! WRITE ON!!

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Review of I'm Still Me  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi BIG BAD WOLF is hopping ,
I'm reviewing your non-fiction item, "I'm Still Me" .

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What an incredibly amazing story you have to tell! You've had some difficulties to overcome and it looks like you did so with flying colors! I think it's great that you're working with some mentors and I wish you all the best. I hope you are able to get your book published!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
No improvement necessary. You did a wonderful job telling the world about yourself!

Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work and WRITE ON!!!

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Review of "A Man Among Men"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi piewhackett1,
I'm reviewing your poem, ""A Man Among Men"" .

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What a beautiful poem and lovely tribute to your father. I lost my dad when I was 25. No matter how old we are, it's so hard to lose a parent. I hope writing about it helped (it helped me). My favorite part was the following:

"This man among men I am proud to say.
Instilled in me his gentle love and ways."

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
I have just two minor suggestions. In the last sentence of your next to last stanza, I think it should be "an honorable". Also, the first line of your last stanza should be "too late". Other than that, I love it and think it's absolutely perfect.

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work. WRITE ON!!

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Review of Everything You Do  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brooklyn ,
I'm reviewing your poem, "Everything You Do" .

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What a beautifully sweet tribute to your mom for her birthday! I'm sure she loved it. It's AWESOME!!!

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There's not a thing I would change. It's perfect as is...and very deserving of the *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star* rating I'm giving it!

Thanks for sharing and keep up the GREAT work! WRITE ON!!!!

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Review of DADDY'S SHOTGUN  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy ,
I'm reviewing your non-fiction piece, "DADDY'S SHOTGUN" . I'm not going to write this as a "typical" review. Your piece is perfectly written but no rating or review could ever do it justice. Thank you for sharing such a personal, emotional piece. I hope writing about it has helped you. God clearly has a plan for you and I believe part of that plan is sharing your story to help others.

Please keep writing. You have a story that needs to be told. Thank you again for sharing this.
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