An enjoyable read. Around here, all the ice cream parlors close for the winter, so I guess I'll just sit in the parking lot and if anyone asks if I need something I'll answer, “Nope. Guess I’ll just wait for Spring.”
I doubt it. The point of these microscopic stories is that they last for 100 words and that's it. So the most I can hope from them is a quick grin or thought and the reader moves on. This one depends a lot on irony, I suppose.
I suspect we've all had experiences like this, TJ. But this one came at a time when I was really looking for something to write about. Hence the "heaven" comment. ;)
He is perfect. I have washed him, every part of him. And he is beautiful. They told me to watch him and for three months I have done so. I have cared for his every moment. No one has been more attentive to his needs than me. I am devoted to him.
“Nurse…”
What? He speaks! He is waking. See, the wavering line grows strong. He is surfacing!
“Nurse…”
He is definitely coming out of it. No, they will take him away from me. I must keep him under. Increase his medicine. He is so beautiful.
Word count: 100
For Micro-Fiction Challenge, Week 8
Prompt: Babysitting.
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