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Full of the power you decide to look for your ex-boyfriend Craig. Craig broke up with you a while back saying that it just wasn't working out, but that you could still be friends. But you found out that truth he was seeing another girl. It was time that you got revenge on him. In the guise of just being friends you got Craig alone and quickly you gained control over him.
You didn't know at first what revenge to do to him. You enjoyed what you did to Hannah and thought you should do something similar. But you couldn't ruin his reputation he was a guy. Then you thought wait a minute, I could do it.
"Craig." you said.
"Yes," he replied in the dull tones of someone hypnotized.
Then you decided to make Craig into someone like Hannah. "Craig, you know your whole life in a lie."
"Yes, it is." Craig said knowing that it was a lie but not knowing how.
Continuing, "You know you may look like a boy on the outside, but on the inside you feel like a girl."
"I feel like a girl."
"You have always felt this way"
"I have always felt this way."
"But you aren't going to lie anymore. From now on you are going to be the person you truly are. You are going to give up your name Craig. You don't want to lie any more and use the name you have always thought of yourself as Hannah."
"I am Hannah."
"Yes that is right, You have always admired Hannah because that is how you felt inside. From now on you are going to be just like her."
"I am just like her," Craig, now Hannah repeated. Everyone at school knew Hannah. She used her faith to justify her superiority over anyone who didn't attend her church.
"You dress just like her including makeup and jewelry."
"Yes."
"You are a spiritual woman who believes the best way to live is to find a good Christian man and become a wife and mother."
"Yes."
"From now on, you believe that your outside appearance is the same as your inward perception. No matter what anyone tells you you only see yourself and a pretty young woman."
"I am a pretty young woman."
You then left the former Craig to live his new life.
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