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Rated: XGC · Interactive · Erotica · #1798306

What's it like as predator, instead of prey?

This choice: In you go...hi Jen!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #11

Down HIS hatch?

    by: manubestofplus Author IconMail Icon
*an addition by: Enigma the Fox*

It's like a nightmare. You kick, struggle, try to pull yourself back. But it's no good...you're trapped in your ravenous brother's gullet. The slimy, hot walls ripple again, and your breasts are slowly worked over his lower jaw. Disgustingly, he lingers on them, licking your firm, round chest as he eats you.

Eventually he tires of their taste, and swallows. Sucking you further inside, your breasts massaged down his neck as a larger bulge than the rest of your body. He keeps swallowing, drooling all over your flat tummy as he devours it, and running his tongue over your navel. When he reaches your waist, your head and shoulders fully enter his stomach.

"Ow...this can't be happening, it can't be..."

"Who's there?!"

"Jen? It's me, Mary. He's....he's eating me, too!"

"He just said something about breakfast in bed, grabbed me, and...and ATE me! What's going on!?"

"I don't know! I..."

While you and Jen make your introductions, he's busy pulling down your shorts and thong. You kick, trying to stop him, but you can't. They slide off your feet, finally, and he begins wedging your butt into his hungry maw. Saliva drips out over your naked skin, and with a pleased groan, he manages to fit your sexy, tight rear in. Just like your breasts, he takes a moment to rub his tongue against your unwilling but helpless crotch. You grit your teeth, wishing he'd stop this entire thing...

Your only answer is a loud gulp, and the sensation of his throat pulling down your hips. He sits back, pumping at his erect cock again while he slurps down your long and lovely legs. More and more of you is curled against Jen, your slimy bodies shoved inelegantly against each other. Every second feels like an eternity...then his teeth are around your ankles.

He rocks his head back and forth a little, languidly allwoing his jaws to take in your feet. They wiggle and squirm, only to vanish behind his closing lips, and get forced down his muscular esophagus. You're packed in excrutiatingly tight against Jen, the air humid and almost unbreathable, incredibly hot and syrupy digestive enzymes sloshing over both of you. Mike lets out a positively delighted belch, noisily announcing his fulfillment at having his latest girlfriend and hot sister inside his stomach.

Breathing becomes more and more difficult. Jen went down first, and gives in first, her movements ceasing utterly in the dark. The spongy walls press in on all sides, grinding you against her body, the outlines of your forms vaguely visible in the contours of Mike's extremely bloated gut. In a matter of minutes, you succumb to the lack of good air as well...

It takes a number of hours before Mike can move again. Once he can, he's sure to shut the door. Your fate is listed as another disappearance....one of many that seem to happen all over the world, every day.

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