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Rated: GC · Interactive · Adult · #1945654

A man gets much more than he bargained for when visiting a new bar.

This choice: Go explore the bar some  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

The lay of the land

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Figuring it was his first time Bill decided he was in know rush to let anyone make a claim on him, regardless of how big they were. And so he decided to take a bit of a walk around the place to make sure he wasn’t missing out on anything.

Looking around Bill noticed most of the tables and booths were full of at least one massive biker and a few of the bar stools too, but once his attention was turned to the bar his attention was more clearly drawn to the massive man standing behind it, Bill was instantly entranced by him.

He was shorter than most of the other giants, though compared to Bills current view that was still mighty big, and wore a tight fitting t shirt that showed off incredibly powerful arms and chest. As well as a firm and attractive gut that Bill could just tell was more muscle than fat. He was clearly hairy, though he kept his pitch black beard and hair cut fairly short especially compared to most other guys in the place. And lastly, what caught bill’s attention the most… was the bartender’s almost cartoonishly emerald eyes. A deep beautiful green that made bill think of the perfect summers day laying on the most perfect grass.

Taking the bartender in, Bill watched as he poured a shot for a muscular biker in a cowboy hat. He laughed and chatted to the cowboy and as he pushed the shot over he smiled down at the bar and deftly picked something up between two fingers and after a few words Bill couldn’t hear over the rest of the bars noise watched as the bartender dropped the little thing into the shot and the cowboy laughed as he picked up the shot -and Bill realized it was another shrunken patron. His heart stopped as he watched the cowboy bring the shot to his mouth, his plump lips parting and framed by that handsome greying beard, and he threw back the shot- tiny included. Bill panicked, had this all been a mistake? Seemingly aware of Bill somehow he looked back to the Bartender and saw that he was … looking at him? The bartender gave Bill a wink from one gorgeous emerald eye and then turned his attention back to the cowboy, so to did Bill.


And thankfully relief washed over him as he watched the massive cowboy spit something delicately back into the shot glass as if it were a cherry stem tied with that massive tongue. Bill let out a great sigh and then let his attention turn back to exploring this new wonderland. He began walking towards the nearest wall where two doors stood in there own and let his mind wander as to what it might be like to be so completely in another man’s mouth.


He was shaken from this thought though as a new realization hit him. He was on the floor. He was the size of an ant. And he was on the floor. And the bartender was seemingly the only one who knew he was there. Frantically Bill started to run to at least get under a table for cover but very quickly the fear doubled.


BOOM.


A bit of thunder.


BOOM.


Now Bill felt it vibrating his bones.


BOOM.


By the third step the tremors were so close, and the force so great that Bill was thrown about a foot into the air from his perspective. He turned around after landing hard and struggled to take in the form of the massive bear of a man nearly standing on top of him, and didn’t have time to as before he knew it the giant had stepped over him and entered the door directly behind Bill. Bill turned as the massive door began to close and was fascinated to see dingy tile and a massive stall and several urinals beyond the door.

Suddenly Bill felt a bit of curiosity and was suddenly faced with a new decision…
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1. Enter the bathroom

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2. Continue exploring the main room

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