This choice: They make it all the way to the large intestine. • Go Back...Chapter #14Into Stella's Large Intestine. by: G-Breaker   As Lincoln drove the ship through Stella's small intestine, it became pretty difficult to stay along the path with the tunnel constantly twisting and turning in so many directions. He kept steering left and right erratically until the path finally straightened up again.
"Man, this place is windier than the downtown highway." Lincoln said.
"Just keep going forward, Lincoln. We should be at the next exit soon." Lisa said as she looked at the map and made note of the distance between the moving red dot that was Sub-zilla and their next destination. "Once we're there, it'll be a straight shot out of Stella's body."
Lana stood up from behind Lisa's chair and looked at the map. She was noticed the shape of the small intestine and wasn't sure if she liked what she saw. "Wow, Stella's small intestine is like a giant maze. How are we going to find our way out of here?"
"Fear not, elder sibling. It might look like a cranium-tormenting labyrinth, but I assure you the small intestine follows only one path." Lisa said.
"I just hope we can Stella to notice us once we get out of here." Lucy said.
"Don't worry, girls. If I know Stella, she'll be more than happy to help us get back to normal size." Lincoln said. "After all, if she really does like me that much, I know she won't hesitate."
"Oh, Linky, you do like here." Lola cooed, much to Lincoln's annoyance.
"Once you guys start dating, do you think you could convince Stella to hang out with us too?" Lily asked.
"Look, girls. I get it. We all know that Stella has a thing for me now. But right now, all that matters is getting out of here."
"Speaking of which, how are we going to get out of here?" Lola asked. "We'll be back in Stella's room once we reach the end of here, right?"
That's what Lola was hoping for. But what the pageant princess didn't know was that there was one more obstacle for them to cross before they found their final exit.
"On the contrary, Lola. We still have one more organ to pass through before we exit Stella's body." Lisa said.
"What do you mean?" Lola asked.
Lisa was about to go further into the details, but Lincoln urged her not to since he already knew how Lola would react. So, Lisa peered behind her seat and looked at Lola with a sneer, which didn't make her feel much better.
"Lisa?"
"After the small intestine, we'll make our way into the LARGE intestine." Lisa elaborated with a big emphasis on 'large'. "And once we're there, well..." Tauntingly, Lisa gestured for Lola to come closer so she could whisper the rest of the details into her ear.
"Lisa, I'm warning you." Lincoln said threateningly, but Lisa just ignored him.
Lisa began whispering their escape plan to Lola, with Lana and the other sisters listening in as well. And needless to say, Lola was not thrilled about it one bit.
"EWWWWWW! EW! EW! EW! EW! THAT IS GROSS!" Lola yelled as she recoiled in her seat in absolute disgust.
"Lisa!" Lincoln scolded the young genius as she laughed in her seat, amused by Lola's reaction.
"Apologies, Lincoln. I couldn't help it." Lisa said.
"You're saying we're going to get out through Stella's-" Lana began until Lola put her hand over her twin's mouth.
"Not. Another. Word." Lola growled.
"POO POO!" Lily exclaimed, much to Lola's dismay.
"I must admit. The thought of it doesn't sound very satisfying." Lucy said. "Are you sure there's no other way out?"
"There might be, but right now, this is our only option. So, we have no other choice." Lisa said.
"Fine, but let's never talk about it again." Lola said.
"Okay. Enough, girls." Lincoln said. "As soon as we get to the large intestine, it'll be smooth sailing from here on out. We'll be just fine."
Lincoln was hoping they'd have a safe trip through the small intestine, but unfortunately, it was about to take a turn for the worst. Back outside, Stella was still reading at her desk until she finally got tired of it.
"Sigh, all right. I've had it with soaking my cares away." Stella said as she closed her book and put it back on her shelf. Now that she was bored with reading, the brunette teenager didn't have a lot of other options for how to spend her day. She was only trying to get over her disappointment from before, but she just couldn't think of anything else to do.
"I've just got to get over this. If only I had something else to do." As she sat at her desk with her head propped onto her hands, Stella eventually thought of something that her mother always told her to do whenever she was out of sorts. "My mom always said a good workout can help you forget what's bothering you. Eh, why not?"
With that, Stella stood up from her desk and left her room. Unfortunately, her sudden movement proved to be a problem for the six shrunken siblings currently residing inside her digestive tract.
"Just a little further, and we'll be out of here in-WHOA!" Lincoln yelled as a sudden burst of speed caught him and the girls by surprise.
Before anyone knew it, the current in the intestinal tunnel suddenly picked up, throwing the shrunken Louds into an uncontrolled spin throughout the organic pathway. Lincoln tried to regain control of the ship, but he couldn't even get back into a straight line as the current caused the ship to spin violently as it was pulled deeper into the tunnel.
"What's going on?! Why are we moving so fast?!" Lana yelled.
"I think I'm going to be sick!" Lily added, feeling slightly nauseous from their erratic movements.
"Everyone buckle up and hang on, I'm gonna get us out of this!" Lincoln yelled, and all of them complied by strapping themselves in and holding on tight as he tried to steer them out of the current.
Lincoln did his best to steer the ship through the speeding current while avoiding the countless villi lining the intestinal walls. Things only got worse once the tunnel started contracting and opening back up every few seconds, causing the current to pull the ship back and forth along the way.
"What's happening, Lisa?!" Lincoln asked.
"I'll check the outer feed camera!" Lisa hit some buttons on the ship's computer until it showed a view of Stella from the outside. Fortunately, nobody was in the mood to question how she got that image. The camera showed Stella was currently doing some aerobic stretches in her living room, which explained why her insides were moving around so fast.
"Bad news, Lincoln. It looks like Stella is exercising!" Lisa said. "Here fast motions are accelerating the speed of her organ functions. We have to move before it's too late!"
"Alright. Hang on everyone! To the large intestine!" Lincoln drove the ship forward amongst the chaos that threw them into a loop. Fortunately, he managed to get them to the end of tunnel just before Stella's intestine could contrict them. "There it is! We're gonna make it!"
At that moment, Subzilla plowed through the small intestine and squeezed through the sphincter that led into the large intestine. Once it made it all the way through, the ship fell into another fleshy tunnel and landed on its floor where there was no longer any liquid to float in.
*GRRRRRRGGGGGLE!*
In the middle of Stella's workout, she suddenly felt a small bit of pleasure in her lower stomach that made her hold her stomach in slight discomfort.
"Ooh," she groaned as she heard a gurgling noise from her stomach that sounded a tad unpleasant. "Where did that come from? Maybe I should come cut back on those cookies?"
Back inside her body, the Louds were relieved to be out of Stella's small intestine, but now they were stuck in her large intestine with no way to get the ship moving. The large intestine was like a longer version of the small intestine that followed a completely straight path. The only problem they could see now was the putrid odor that filled the place.
"Peeyew! This place smells worse than Lana's socks on laundry day." Lola said, holding her nose in disgust.
"Well, it is the last place where the food goes before disposal." Lisa said, much to Lola's annoyance. "But don't worry, I have just the thing."
Lisa pressed another button on the panel, causing tank treads to grow from the bottom of the ship. The ship was now ready to move through Stella's large intestine and complete the Loud's journey back into the outside world.
"You really thought of everything, Lisa." Lincoln said. "Now, let's get out of here."
With that, Lincoln drove them through Stella's large intestine as quickly as he could. Luckily, there was no way for Stella's movements to put them in danger like in the small intestine. But that didn't mean their troubles were completely over just yet.   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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