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Allegra Pierce, a tiny physical therapist, navigates a chaotic life. (UPDATED 9/14/25)

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Chapter #4

Braving the Wild Slides with Shaye and Carmine

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Carmine hoists you up with one hand, still giggling, while Shaye presses a reassuring palm against your back. “Next up,” Carmine announces, “we’re hitting the Twister Torrent! It’s the fastest, craziest slide here, you’ll go flying straight down on your back!”

You gulp. “O-Okay…flying straight down? I really don’t know if—”

“Shh,” Shaye says, holding you gently. “Remember, Allegra, I’m here. You don’t have to do anything you don’t want.” She gives you a soft smile and lifts you onto her shoulder, resting you securely as she carries you toward the massive slide. “Don’t worry, Ally. I’ve got you.” You clutch her swimsuit strap nervously, the wind tugging at your tiny body as you perch high on her shoulder.

The Twister Torrent snakes above the waterpark like a twisting blue serpent, its smooth surface gleaming in the sunlight. The sound of rushing water echoes up the tower, and the slide’s height makes your stomach drop just looking at it.

At the top of the slide, a lifeguard stands scanning the line. She is short and thicc, with dark brown hair pulled into a messy ponytail, and hazel eyes that are sharp but friendly. Her bright red one-piece swimsuit hugs her curves and toned thighs, giving her a strong, confident presence.

“Hey there!” she calls down, waving. “I’m Mara, the lifeguard in charge of the Twister Torrent today! Heads-up: this ride is one person at a time. It’s super fast—twists, and turns all the way down!”

Carmine waves. “Hi! This is my niece, Shaye, and my cousin, Allegra. They’re coming up for their first ride today!”

Shaye adds with a soft laugh, “Hi, Mara! Allegra’s an…affected, but I’ll be carrying her.”

Mara’s eyes soften. “Nice to meet you all! Allegra, you’ll have a choice: you can go by yourself, with Shaye, with Carmine, or even with me to make sure you’re safe. But take your time deciding.”

Your tiny body quivers at the options. Alone? Terrifying. With Carmine? Probably even worse. Shaye? Safe, but what if Carmine decides to interfere? Mara? Probably the safest and most predictable choice.

Carmine snorts. “Oh, come on, little Insectito! Don’t chicken out! You’re strong enough to ride with me!” She holds you out in front of her, tilting her head playfully. “It’ll be fun. I promise.”

Shaye hugs you gently against her shoulder. “Allegra, it’s up to you. If you want to go with me, I’ll try my best to make sure nothing bad happens. If you want to go alone, that’s okay. Or Mara can help. Whatever feels safest.”

As Shaye carries you forward, you try to steady your trembling hands. The line winds upward in a steep spiral, each step making your stomach twist more. Carmine keeps teasing you, pressing her shoulder against yours, nudging you slightly, as if to see if she can make you fall or squeal.

“Relax, little Insectito,” Carmine whispers, smirking. “It’s just a slide. My big booty will be right behind if you need…motivation to go faster.”

Shaye gives Carmine a sharp glare. “Allegra isn’t your toy. Stop it.” She adjusts you on her shoulder, letting your tiny feet dangle over her collarbone. “Ignore her, Ally. She won't squash you.”

That’s reassuring, though you know Carmine is almost giddy with all the different ways this slide offers to torment you.

The three of you reach the top platform, where the water roars into the twists and turns below. Mara is already positioned, giving clear instructions to riders in line. She holds out her hand to you and Shaye.

“All right, Allegra,” she says, kneeling slightly so you can see her clearly. “You have all the choices, and I’ll be right here the whole way. You don’t have to rush—think about it. Who feels safest?”

You cling to Shaye’s shoulder, staring down the twisting slide. “Uh…Mara…how would it even work if I rode with someone?” you ask nervously.

Mara kneels closer, a reassuring smile on her face. “We’d have to conceal you somewhere on their swimsuit,” she explains. “Somewhere secure so you don’t get washed away or squished. I can help make sure you’re comfortable and safe the whole way.”

You frown, thinking it over. “Where…where would that even be?”

Mara tilts her head, considering. “Well…since swimsuits don’t offer many options, the two most common areas are either in the top or the back of the bikini.” She spins around slowly to show off her own swimsuit, a snug one-piece that hugs her curves. “I wear a one-piece because with a two-piece, my butt eats up too much space and doesn’t properly keep the affected secured for the ride. Though,” she adds with a playful smack of her own rear, “the one piece does make it harder to get the affected out of this big thing!”

You blink in shock, your tiny body quivering, and quickly speak up. “I-I think…maybe I want to try riding by myself…”



Option 1: You are allowed to go down by yourself...but what happens when you land in the pool at the bottom all by yourself.

Option 2: Carmine’s eyes immediately gleam with mischief. “Alone? Oh, little Insectito, that’s scary! You need Mara's help!” With that Mara drops you down her swimsuit and you fall all the way down her back until you land snug between her cheeks.

Option 3: Carmine tricks Mara and Shaye into letting her take you.

Option 4: You manage to hitch a ride with Shaye down the slide.
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