Review of The Top

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good story which is well developed and flowed quite well. The dialogue was handled expertly and was meaningful to the story plot. It was an interesting add to have the toy be the direction for the story. The sexual action is precise and with enough detail as to be pleasing. The story also left an opening for continuation.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The story line was almost believeable and was quite entertaining. Your character development just lacks physical description of the characters. I found their friendly interaction to be a definite assset to the tale.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

It is a good story and obviously well editted bacause I could find no grammatical or spelling errors.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep up the good work. Please continue to enter your stories in Sensual Moments 4.

dblameck
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .