\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
◄     December    
1969
SMTWTFS
 
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
29
30
31
Archive RSS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4820851
Review #4820851
Viewing a review of:
 Contest Entries Open in new Window. [13+]
Most entries are going to be E rated but some may go beyond that.
by Angelica Weatherby- Father Day Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "The VacationOpen in new Window.
Credit this reviewer
#4820851
Review of Contest Entries  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Thank you for entering "The Anthro Activity AnteroomOpen in new Window.. Enjoy the review!

Let's see - Judy and Nick from Zootopia encounter some members of the - it seems - reformed Bad Guys gang, and one of their friends, while on vacation. However, it seems that vacation will need to wait, as a bank has just been robbed, and now it's a case of all hands on deck as they head odd in pursuit of the thieves. Will they make it in time? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem to be mostly in-character.

Spelling and Grammar
The only Spelling/Grammar issue I noticed is that "Tow" should be "Two".

Suggestion
You mention the groups cheering at the beginning. To me, this makes little sense. Now, if there was a volleyball game or something similar going on, then cheering might make sense.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another signiture image

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 06/14/2025 @ 4:11pm EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4820851