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Review of Wanting to fit in  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Conflicting emotions in the name of trying to fit in.
Your form and structure are consistent.
Rhyming is well timed and creates a smooth flow.
Emotionally there is much to hold the readers attention. That's imagery done well.
Pace is slow and full of emotional turmoil.
No visible gammatical mattrs exist to cover.
Write on!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings Winnie; I found this through random read.

Teddy is in a lot of emotional pain.
It would seem as though a child's life was lost.
The dad is not taking it so well and the reader is pulled along through the tale.
The wife is trying all she can to get her hubby back into life,
it's just that Teddy is not ready to move on, so the waiting continues.
This is generated from the imagery you pepper your piece with.

Form and structure are well laid out.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory steeped.
Grammatically speaking; your piece is pristine and that's a blessing to the reader taking this story in at one sitting.
No suggestions for improvement are needed.
You have a complete story here and leaves the reader wanting to know more.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your piece is in Noticing Newbies newsletter 5-6-15.
I often use them for reviewing opportunities.

I feel confusion and sadness mostly in this piece.
The character is confused ss to why he/she is sitting on the sidewalk now. The reader wants to know more.
Form and structure are superb.
There is a sense of s march going pn.
The flow in this vein is smooth and grammstically snafu free.
Pace is slow and steady. In the end the reader wants yo know. Standing or still sitting?
Write on!
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Review of Haiku for Spring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-6-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Haiku's are cool.
They're useful tools.
A short burst of color,
Life lived in your hometown.
And it's effect upon the nasal passages, lends the human factor to it all.
Form and structure are fine.
Flow is smooth and easy on the eye.
Pace is slow and methodical. Bless you!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-6-15
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Joy as the saying goes "April showers bring May flowers."
It was a joy to read this one. So much to love, so much to experience, so much to enjoy.
Even though the rain is coming down, you manage to create a sense of fun in the midst of it all.
Why it's almost like busting out in a refrain from Singing in the Rain.
Flora, fauna, and people too,
Getting wet, the God given dew.
All framed in remarkable poetic stanzas,
laced with imagery that brings to life your subject matter, the rain.

Write on!
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Review of Magnolia  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-6-15
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Hey Mars:
This is out of this world.
Pardon the pun.
Your piece is a masterpiece.
Form and structure are serene.
Imagery evokes peace and restfulness.
Rhythmical and grammatically as clean as a whistle.
Pace is slow, as the reader takes in all you have for us to see and hear.
Thanks for sharing and caring in the WdC.

Write on!
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Review of Spring Diamante  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-6-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Nicely done with this Diamond in the rough.
Starting with a seedling, and popping out of the ground,
You bring the reader through the journey in such a graceful way.
Form and structure are remarkable.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free,
Pace is slow and senses shattering trom start to finish.
The action verbs give life to this piece that is amazing.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of False Flowering  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
So is the "orchid" in fact plastic?
Or have I missed it all around?
Poetry newsletter 5-6 displays your piece.
I like the structure of this.
The imagery is sparkling.
Flow is smooth and grammstically clean.
Pace is slow and senses assailing.

Write on!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The last line speaks volumes.
The blood basically turning the water red.
You do well to honor the fallen here.

Form is simple and symmetrical.
Flow is smooth and and chilling.
Pace is slow as the reader contemplates the immensity of the loss.
Prosaic and fittingly so.
Grammatically clean as a whistle,
Write on!

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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The birth of a muse.
Wow what an image.
As in imagery pops!
Form and structure are consistent.
Prosaic and rhythmical all in one.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is fast.
Grammatically your piece is top drawer.
Write on!

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Review of PAY ATTENTION  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 5-6-15
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You have a good piece here, with a life lesson to learn.
The emotion of the ant's plight keeps the readers attention.
That's good imagery you use here and congratulations for that.
Form and structure - your piece runs together with on paragraph breaks.
This results in the hampered flow you have here.
Pace is slow; for two reasons; 1) the whole piece is one long block of sentences; 2) there are some words that are missing a letter or misspelled.
The reason this matters and needs to be checked is that it effects the readers ability to see what you are trying to convey in your story. You have a great message here and I'd recommend you restructure it at the places of complete thoughts. 2 line paragraphs and 2 spaces after each period.

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Review of Purpose  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 5-6-15
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Welcome to the WdC!

Deep thoughts indeed.
The emotional tags present keep the reader fixed to the lines.
Lines that are rhythmical with a flow that mimics the dripping waters that pursue your descent.
Form and structure are well thought out.
Pace is slow and sensory filled as the character leads us deeper into the heart of it all.
Grammatically speaking your piece is clear.


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Review of The Caregiver  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 5-6-15
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A very catchy opening line.
The reader wants to know more.
You then describe what you are as "caregiver" in the eyes of others you minister to.
Emotionally the reader can identify with one or more of the things you are to others.
Form and structure are solid.
Flow is smooth, with a rhythmical tone to it.
Pace is slow and senses touching.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.

Write on!
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Review of Thrice Prompted  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-6-15
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Graphics are eye-catching.
Unique judging system piques the readers/contestants interest.
Rules are straight forward and the contestants know what is expected of them.
Form and structure are standard fare for a contest forum.
Flow is smooth and to this readers eyes, no visible grammatical matters were around to create a stumbling block.
Pace is slow and steady as the reader begins to access the criteria and the prompts.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-4-15
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Remarkable piece.
Memories of strife and some peace.
Emotional tags galore,
No wavering of the resolve to continue to the end.

Form and structure are criteria well set.
Flow is smooth and rhythmical in nature.
Pace is slow and senses assailing.
Nary a jot nor tittle is found to stray.

Write on!
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Review of Rust  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-4-15
Yes I am way behind in my newsletters, but hey you're here. Yay!
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Rust the metal it does encrust.
Your view of this process brings an emotional response.
Form and structure are strong.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Nary a jot nor tittle is out of place.

Write on!
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Review of Autumn's Ceremony  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a fairy tale you do have here.
The language of fairyland is round about.
A wedding scene in the forest,
The bride getting ready, the groom hiding in the bushes.

Form and structure are firmly in place.
Rhyming is present and leads a bit of a melody to the piece.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow, as the scene unfolds stanza by stanza.
Well done!
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Review of Allusion Infusion  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-15-15
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Thanks for the article on Allusion.
The reader is hooked and ready for the ride.
Form and structure is cool.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and full of important things to remember.
Grammatically speaking; nary a jot nor tittle appears to go awry.

Write on!
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Review of Crazy  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
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Alrighty then.
Emotionally the reader is kinda creeped out.
Form is unique.
Flow is a bit rough.
Pace is slow and spooky too.
Grammatically no visible hiccups appear.
Keep writing here and elsewhere. Just make sure the rating is appropriate. In this case it is so well done.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
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You had me all the way and I never expected the punch line at the end. Bravo! You tell a tale well, and the reader is caught up in the emotion of fear and trepidation that comes with some horrible visage a girl sees everywhere.
Form and structure are foundational.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically no visible misspellings are evident.

Write on!
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Review of Moonrise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
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This is a good start on something that can be grown into a good story.
Flow is good, enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical snafu's other than one item.
The street name "Sea child lane", perhaps keeping the capital letter motif for child and lane would be better. Seeing it like it is made me pause to make sure it was a part of the street name.
Pace is slow and sensory filled, the overall impression this reader gets from this is the main character is about to reveal their true self to someone who means a lot to him/her.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece on The Hub.
Waxing philosophical is what I got out of this piece.
Emotionally there is enough to keep the readers attention.
Form is adequate.
Structure is standard fare.
Flow is smooth,
Pace is slow and detail filled,
Grammatically snafu free, you earn an extra three.

Write on!
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Review of My Friend (At 8)  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your piece on the Hub.
Rating is right as the first lines are rough.
Emotionally the reader is caught up in the characters reminiscences.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically snafu free layout.
Pace is slow and sensory absorbing.

Write on!
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Review of CALEB  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Hub.
Caleb appears to be a complex character.
He reminds this reader of "the thinker."
The ,character is enigmatic, and intriguing.
One wonders if there is more to come for Caleb.
Form and structure make this feel a bit cramped.
Flow is hampered by this factor.
The lines are many, the thoughts are jumbled together.
A suggestion to improve the flow would be to break this into a few paragraphs, so the reader has a chance to digest the complete thoughts you have here.
Pace is slow as the reader attempts to follow the characters progression.
Grammatically speaking your piece is clean.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
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Nobody:

You are somebody,
why the chosen handle?
You write from the heart,
that;'s the best part.

Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and rhythmical.
Pace is slow and sensory filled,
chock full of sensory tags to keep the readers attention from stem to stern.
Now that's imagery that makes a piece; like a good book; hard to put down.

Write on!
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