I just uploaded a new story on my portfolio after a long time, can you all tell me how it is? https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2210924
This is a link of my new story.
I know that I'm not a good writer. But I want to try.
Please help me to improve myself.
I am waiting for your response.
thank you, everyone.
I will not make the mistake of wanting you again. Once I am broken and shattered, I will not make the mistake of breaking again. Even if you try to return again, God promise I will not let you come again in my life.
You say you have nothing but your brother. I don't even have that. No mom, no dad, so siblings, no grandparents, and my children have almost all moved away. I still feel you have lots in your life. You have wdc friends, you have your writing. In my writing I make the worlds like I'd have them be. You can make worlds as you'd like them. Write about the family and events you remember