|What a delightful poem. A lovely expression of friendship and learning, and I do feel that a child would enjoy reading this. One small quibble, the lines 'Gertie the giant goldfish bubbled, "what are you trying to do?"
And Gary Galah's screeched 'Boo Boo Boo" ' are a bit too long and break up the flow spomewhat. Could I suggest either 'Gertie Goldfish...' or 'Gertie the goldfish...', then lose the 'And' on the next line, so:
Gertie goldfish bubbled, "what are you trying to do?"
Gary Galah's screeched "Boo Boo Boo"
Other than that, a real pleasure to read.