I really like your poem. I am considering writing a poem for this prompt, and my idea from the picture was much differnent as far as the relationship between the pumpkin and the moon. I found your take on it clever, and I enjoyed your word selection and thought the flow was fanastic. Well done and good luck to you.
This was really beautiful. The author's unending support and unconditional love shines through and is an amazing thing. The details of this relationship were moving and quite lovely. The sorrow felt here is subtle but loud and clear, yet it remains a positive and uplifting mesage to the friend. Very nice!
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