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322 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review of Sisters  
Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Graham B

From the first sentence I was hooked. Your story "Sisters" has a nice beginning which makes the reader to follow it. The middle of the story is very emotional and the end of the story is not expected. You will be a great mystery writer one day if you practice enough. I did enjoy reading "Sisters" so much that I decided to send you some Gift Point as a means of encouragement. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review of Beauty of Age  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very pretty poem Druid. But the reality is that the majority of us pretend to be open minded. When it comes to us to choice a friend we do not look inside them. We go for their outside beauty such as money, beauty of face or figure, or how young and without a wrinkle a person is. I have noticed that elder generations are friendless because of their old age and creases as well as their wrinkles. I wish everyone was like you.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi;

My dear fellow-man, you have touched a very subject beautifully. No word of God permits a being to put another being through unthinkable revenge for the seek of being more powerful. Your poetry is full of meaningful words. If only humanity would not fall for deceiving words of some Godless opportunistic. Indeed our seeds comes form one authority.

I liked your poem very much. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Dad;

The fast that you were honest about your poem made me read it. Frankly, it is so bad that made me laugh and for this reason alone it is a great poem.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review of Elephants  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kai Joy

It is very interesting that somebody is writing a poem for elephants. They are very misunderstood because of their huge sizes. I liked your poem.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Renae;

You have really put your finger on one of the most delicate subjects that the societies around the world faces today but most cultures try to ignore it. I know a couple that married with love . The husband is a loving man and very faithful to his family. No extra activates is going on with him. The woman is 42 with two kids from the same husband but she has fall out of love with her husband. She wants more money and fancy clothing. The children are 3 and 5 and their mother is using them against their father. The little girl now has headache almost every night. The husband is telling his wife I can provide a good life for the children so let us get a divorce and I can rise the children with help of my mother and my sister but the wife refuses to get divorce. The wife has managed to isolate her husband from his friend. No one dares to go to their home, she start insulating them and wish them death.

When I read your story I felt very sorry for my friend because in your story the two parties agree with a divorce but on my friends the woman is avoiding the divorce and makes the life more difficult for everyone.

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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi;

I agree with you. When the relationship among adults ends, they do not think about their children's emptions. I know a couple that married five years ago and now they have two beautiful children but unfortunately things are not working between them and dad is always with his son and mom does not allow even for her five years daughter to go swimming with her own dad. The father takes his son to water park and Disney theme parks and buys many toys for him and their daughter practically prisoner in her parents home.

Mom is taking revenge on her husband and not even ex-husband by preventing her daughter to go to grandparents home even for five hours.

You really covered the problems of failed adult retentions well. When I read something I am not too much concern about grammar. What I like to see is what the write has to say. As a writer you did well
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Royal Eduardo;

I liked your story very much. You really worked hard to captive the audiences attention. It is very difficult to write mystery story. But you did great.


Sincerely,


Zheila

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Review of Veggies  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello rosewater;

You are a very good writer. The food dialog was amazing. It is very hard to be genuine. I was very much hooked on reading until the end. It is very difficult to make the reader finish reading without getting board. I do hope that you would continue writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Herefordishirehop;

I must admit you have a very unusual but interesting name. I read your chapter 2 of "The Golden Man". It is very well written. I do not make it my policy to read a story for the sake of a correct grammar. I read it for pure enjoyment or I read documentary to learn something. Having said these. I really liked " The Golden Man". It surely motives readers to keep reading. I am sending a gift point your way since you eidesire it. Keep up the good work.



Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review of Rev  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Someguy;
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The story of " Rev" is an interesting one. It does captures the audiences attention. It makes one to keep reading . You know how to keep your readers occupied reading through. The only thing that I wanted to know is why the robot did kill the Dr.? Please keep writing. You will be very good at it. I am sending you 200 Gift Point in order to keep you motived. A job well done.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Noon's Cat  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Jatog;

I did enjoy reading "Noon's Cat" for the following reasons. You know how to explain the cat's behavior. You have mastery over the words. You have visualized the cat's situation well. It is very funny poem and you have written it beautifully. I am sending some Gift Points in your way because I liked it very much. Please keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi J.

It is true e that all of us are born with a strong sense of imagination but the older we become and the more i.involve we get with our jobs, attending school, and other social gatherings, life teaches us not to use our imagination. We stop using it for the sake of being ridiculed by our friends and member of our families. Your short story " Use your imagination" is well written and I did enjoy reading it.



Sincerely

Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Queen;

I liked your story" Dell and the Charming hacker". It is exactly my story wit my HP. The only difference is that my security system was still working but a fake Java program took over my computer and I lost everything I had. Your story shows how human race is venerable in front to computers and their master hackers. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of Love is Poultry  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Mitchopolis;

Your poem " Love is Poultry". I found myself reading and laughing. You did a great job writing this delicious poem. It is short and to the point. A job very well done. I liked it very much. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Thaddeus;

I also have a deep sorry for loosing such a great comedian. I loved Robin Williams very much too. I read your beautiful poem " Oh Captain! Our Captain" It is very well written and captures the hear to any reader . I job well done. You have a talent to write poetry. I liked your poem so much that I am awarding you with some of my Gift Points.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI Mikey;

I am so sorry to respond to your request so late. I must have overlooked it. I noticed that you have chosen a very nice subject for your poem the raining London. Therefore you must be British. The words flow nicely. You gave a good picture of what you were trying to say with your poem. I did enjoy reading it very much. Have a wonderful New Year.

Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi LLooper;

I am not an English teacher . So I looked at your story as a point of a reader. I was impressed by your writing skill. Your story moved me to the tears. Your wrote " A gift from the Gods" very smoothly. I enjoyed reading it very much. I would like to offer you a Gift Point to you. Please keep up the good work
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Danza

Welcome to writing.com. It is a very lovely place to be at. I am so sorry to answer you so late. After all it was Christmas. The story about your grandpa touched my soul. I am no English teacher but I like to read a lot. I liked your story very much because it was simple and was emotional. I also lost my father six months ago. I remember that one day he turned to me and said Zheila, I shall never leave this house alive.

I believe that a writer should capture readers heart and that is what you have done well. Please keep writing. I would like to read more of your writings soon. I would like to present you with welcoming Gift Point.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Allen;

The stories abut the nature are the most delightful one. You are a good story teller." Mother Nature Said No" has all the elements of fun and surprise for the readers. A good story teller is not the one who knows the grammar the best. The person should keep the reader interested to read through and this is what youeh have done.



Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Finder  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sailor;

The story of "The Finder" is a good listen for parents to come to themselves and do not think that because the house a friend is close by nothing will happened. I liked your story as a reader It had all the elements of suspense's and it was well written.



Sincerely,



Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi A. Barnes;

It read your info "High tech and low life is the name of the game for private detective Chris Black." It looked very interesting. I continued reading through. It seem that you mentioned the story had "High tech" which I missed it. Other than that it is well written.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com




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Review of The Thrift Store  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
My dear Humble Dragon;
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I read your story " The Thrift Store" very carefully and this my opinion.
1) you write beautifully..
2) You had a nice introduction.
3) The reader gets hooked and wants to follow through.
4) You have visualized the town well, I can see it.
5) Your readers are co,
correct, You can turn this short story into a book. It is very enjoyable to read. I liked it so much that I am sending you a Gift Point to motive you to keep writing.

It was a pleasure reading it.

Sincerely,

Zheila

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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon;

Your style is very unique. The story very funny. This proves that you have a natural talent for writing comedies. You do have a strong story to read. You make your audiences to laugh from the beginning. You write for general reader and anyone can read the story without being offended. Nice work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Journey  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Phoenix;

I must say that it was a sad story. However, it had a powerful message. That drinking and driving does not mix. I started reading your story " The Journey" thinking that I am not going to finish it and I though it is going to be another boring one. On the contrary it turn on to be a very well written. I enjoyed it very much.



Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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