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322 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review of MAD Flute  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Scobin;

I saw the title of your poem"MAD Flute", It sounded very interesting. I found the followings.
1) Nice title
2) It is very funny.
3) It is well written.
4) It is short enough for a fast reading.
5) It is suitable for any age.
6) It does have a good rhyme.
All together you have done a great job with this poem.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Shaara;


I read your "A Pearl in an Oyster". It is beautifully written. I liked it very much because, It is short and sweet. People these days do not have time to read a long story. You have kept it very simple. You have mentioned the problem with working a trouble manger in the work place well. Good work my dear.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of GOOD STUFF!  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joy;

I was in mood to read a comedy. The tile of your story caught my attention. I started to read and from the very begging I found out " GOOD STUFF!" to be well written. short enough for fast reading. You made all the problems into a very funny story. I liked it very much. Please continue the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Always  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alexandra Lizzi;

Your story "Always" is a sad one with a great possibility of these types of events in the near future. Nightly programs such as Coasttocoast A.M have been warning the public in years in advance of biological, nuclear, and some strange weapons for de-populating humanities. I must say that you did a great job on showing the dark side of the war. Your powerful story makes the person to go through and wondering what will happens next. It is a job well done.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of My Wife's Escape  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Simple Dykie;

The title of your story caught my attention. I decided to start reading it immediately. The followings are what I have to say to you.
1) The story is short enough for a fast reading.
2) the story has originality, something that is rare these days even in Hollywood movies..
3) It is very funny.
It is very well written. I did like it very much. A job well done.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Gym Split  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Than Pence;

I was looking for something not only to read but also to cheer me up too. Your poem Gym Split" did just that for me. I just imagine the scene and could not stop laughing. I liked your poem for the following reasons. Nice title. The just was original. It was short for fast reading. It is job well done my friend. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Leather Boot  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Katlin Conklin;

The tile of your story " The Leather Boot" caught my attention. The story is short enough for fast reading. It has suspense, it is original and it makes the reader to follow up through. One never can guess who the real thief can be. It is an interesting story to read. I liked it very much.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Rose  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Victoria;

I am one hundred percent agree with you. The roses are the most beautiful and gentle flowers I have ever had the pleasure to look upon. In the month of May there is a garden close by my home that roses do bloom. I make sure to visit them each earth and spend hours just to smell their sweet fragrances . Your poem is very delicate and beautiful to read.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Playground  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jess Reid;

You wrote this is your first attempt. Vow you have done a great job. Well done my friend. I wish I could well as you did with your first poem. I read and enjoyed every word of it. You do have the right material to become a great poet. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of First Fool  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Mike;

I read your story " First Fool". It is very interesting. It proves that what goes around comes around. Your story is very captivating, it is proper for teenagers that go through a lots of things like these. It is well written. And if you like, you can expand on that. I did like it very much. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila a member of writing.com


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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi there Duane Engelhardt ;

Your short story took me back years ago when I was back in school. I guess it does not make any different which country one comes from , there is always some trouble maker everywhere. I like your story for the following reasons. It is short but to the point. It tells the story of all the generations. It is well written and is entertaining. It is a job well done. Have a great day.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dragon;

I read your "Finding the Black Sheep". Your story has all the quality of good mystery. I must say that the reader would like to continue and find our more about the datives' investigations. You could elaborate more if you wish. It has interesting start. it is original and I liked it very much. Please do keep up the good work.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing. com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello MrBugSir;

I went through the list of all the stories that listed, and the tile of your story " Detective Hyper Cube" caught my attention. Your story motives the reader to follow through and has the element of suspension on it. The story has the originality and you have proven to be a very good mystery writer. I liked it very much.


sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com,
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Coelacanth;

I must say your story "Meditations of a Superhero" is very unique. Assuming that here are superheroes. Their children must have problems too. Something that in no movie anyone has mentioned it. I liked your writing. It is something new. You have yourself a very Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI Lynne Rudolph;

You have touched the most sensitive issue of today's life for teenagers. The more money they make the less they pay attention to their love ones. It is mostly parents neglects that pushes the young ones to early sex with just anybody. Your story "The trouble with crushes" shows the sad part of our young generations lives. A very well done job.Please do keep up the good work. Have a wonderful Christmas.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kyra FireFlame;

I saw the title of Christmas and I had to read it. Your poem" George's Christmas" is very well written. It is very possible that Santa get stock in the chimney since well he is so well rounded. I did enjoy reading your poem and brought back the wonderful childhood memories. I wish you a very Merry Christmas this year and a grand New Year.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,Noizchild;

I had a chance to read you story "Demon Days Angel Nights". I find it very interesting. You are a very good story teller. From the beginning I got hocked. The story made the reader to follow all the way until the end wondering what is going to happen next. Please keep up the good work. I do hope to read more of your works soon. Have a great Holidays.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Wallet  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Josh;

It was really a pleasure to read your story"The Wallet". I could not stop reading it. I had to follow it through. Your writings makes the reader think that it was a true story. I do believe that you do have the skill of becoming a very good mystery writer. Please keep up the good work. Keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of It's a Drug Pt.1  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi queendapples;

It was a pleasure to read your story, I liked it . the followings are the reasons :
1) Interesting Title.
2) It has interesting Character.
3) Make the readers to follow the story through.
4) It gives advise to young adult not to mix up with wrong individual
Please continue writing. I am sure the rest of the story is going to be as good as the first one too.
One question. Why was she chained to the pole? Did the boyfriend did that? Then she must tell her parents and call the police. I do not do that to my own dog.

Have a great day.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Horsewoman;

You wrote this piece one moth before Thanksgiving Day, and I read it one month after that date. I must say it was a very funny.. It was a very well written piece. I liked it very much. Well done.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello WW.

I saw the title of your story and said to myself I should not miss reading this one. Thanksgiving Day must be a day of family and friends gathering without its hassle. I enjoyed reading your thanksgiving day story. You are a very good writer. Your story is short , sweet, and to the point. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi halfwright;

I saw the tile of your story "Why We Don't do Thanksgiving" and said to myself I must read this one. I started reading and could not stop laughing until I finished your story. It is well written, it is funny, and you are right we have to stay with our families no matter what. I wish Thanksgiving Day was not so commercialized . any way have a great Thanksgiving Day.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.ocm
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dog momma;

I saw the title of comedy for thanksgiving day and then your title " Thanksgiving- the dog's eye view" caught my attention. I am also mamma of boy Maltase, so I had to read your story immediately . the followings are the other reasons why I like your story.
1) Nice title.
2) Never before anyone wrote thanksgiving day from the eyes of a pet.
3) It was very funny.
You are a very good writer. Please do keep up the good work. Have a great thanksgiving day with your pet.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Summertime  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi my dear Kymee;

I read your beautiful poem about your daughter. I do hope it is fiction. I have a love one that have become disabled. Therefore, I understand what you must be going through, if it is a true story. The followings are the reasons why I like your poem.
\1) It is very emotional.
2) This is the story of millions of people that have someone out of ordinary. The parents are the Lord's sent angles to earth for that especial child.
3) It is very well written.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alfred;

I enjoyed reading your poem "where the soul bleeds". It brings out the beauty and mystery of the magical forest out into the open. I liked your poem for the following reasons.
1) It was original.
2) It made the readers imagination go wild.

Well done my friend. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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