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322 Public Reviews Given
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Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello MrBugSir;

I went through the list of all the stories that listed, and the tile of your story " Detective Hyper Cube" caught my attention. Your story motives the reader to follow through and has the element of suspension on it. The story has the originality and you have proven to be a very good mystery writer. I liked it very much.


sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com,
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Coelacanth;

I must say your story "Meditations of a Superhero" is very unique. Assuming that here are superheroes. Their children must have problems too. Something that in no movie anyone has mentioned it. I liked your writing. It is something new. You have yourself a very Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI Lynne Rudolph;

You have touched the most sensitive issue of today's life for teenagers. The more money they make the less they pay attention to their love ones. It is mostly parents neglects that pushes the young ones to early sex with just anybody. Your story "The trouble with crushes" shows the sad part of our young generations lives. A very well done job.Please do keep up the good work. Have a wonderful Christmas.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kyra FireFlame;

I saw the title of Christmas and I had to read it. Your poem" George's Christmas" is very well written. It is very possible that Santa get stock in the chimney since well he is so well rounded. I did enjoy reading your poem and brought back the wonderful childhood memories. I wish you a very Merry Christmas this year and a grand New Year.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Wallet  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Josh;

It was really a pleasure to read your story"The Wallet". I could not stop reading it. I had to follow it through. Your writings makes the reader think that it was a true story. I do believe that you do have the skill of becoming a very good mystery writer. Please keep up the good work. Keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of It's a Drug Pt.1  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi queendapples;

It was a pleasure to read your story, I liked it . the followings are the reasons :
1) Interesting Title.
2) It has interesting Character.
3) Make the readers to follow the story through.
4) It gives advise to young adult not to mix up with wrong individual
Please continue writing. I am sure the rest of the story is going to be as good as the first one too.
One question. Why was she chained to the pole? Did the boyfriend did that? Then she must tell her parents and call the police. I do not do that to my own dog.

Have a great day.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Rebecca Malone  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
My dear Aelyah;

I had a chance to read your very emotional story "Rebecca Malone". I must say it is a very emotional one. the story does inspire the reader. It seems the story has a personal touch of what happened to you or a friend and that is why it looks more realistic. You are a very good writer. I enjoyed reading the story. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello WW.

I saw the title of your story and said to myself I should not miss reading this one. Thanksgiving Day must be a day of family and friends gathering without its hassle. I enjoyed reading your thanksgiving day story. You are a very good writer. Your story is short , sweet, and to the point. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi halfwright;

I saw the tile of your story "Why We Don't do Thanksgiving" and said to myself I must read this one. I started reading and could not stop laughing until I finished your story. It is well written, it is funny, and you are right we have to stay with our families no matter what. I wish Thanksgiving Day was not so commercialized . any way have a great Thanksgiving Day.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.ocm
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dog momma;

I saw the title of comedy for thanksgiving day and then your title " Thanksgiving- the dog's eye view" caught my attention. I am also mamma of boy Maltase, so I had to read your story immediately . the followings are the other reasons why I like your story.
1) Nice title.
2) Never before anyone wrote thanksgiving day from the eyes of a pet.
3) It was very funny.
You are a very good writer. Please do keep up the good work. Have a great thanksgiving day with your pet.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Summertime  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi my dear Kymee;

I read your beautiful poem about your daughter. I do hope it is fiction. I have a love one that have become disabled. Therefore, I understand what you must be going through, if it is a true story. The followings are the reasons why I like your poem.
\1) It is very emotional.
2) This is the story of millions of people that have someone out of ordinary. The parents are the Lord's sent angles to earth for that especial child.
3) It is very well written.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Accused  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Just Loti;

I had a chance to read your short story "Accused". I must say it is very sad one. This unfortunate situation may happen to anyone. The followings are the reasons why I like your story.
1) An interesting title.
2) It is original.
3) It is well written.
You are a very good writer. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bscholl;

I was looking for something funny to read which my eyes caught your story. I must say it was what I needed. The followings are the reasons why I liked it.
1)A good title.
2) A good story should keep the reader reading.
3) It is original
4) It was short for fast reading.
You are a good writer. Please continue writing.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing .com
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Review of Hourglass  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1 ;

I had a chance to read your poem" Hourglass". It is very well written. I like the way you wrote the poem in the shape of hourglass. I liked it because it is original. It has a nice rhythm to it. It does come in the best order. It has precision. It is a wonderful poem and you are a great poet. I did enjoy reading it. Please keep up the good work.



Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello my dear J.A

I had a chance to read your chapter VIII "West Brookfield, MA - Chapter VIII". I must say without reading the pervious
chapters I can not do you justice. However, the followings are what I am thinking about your writing.

1) You have chosen a small historic town for your subject. Well, down. These little places with their hard working people are the backbone of America.
2) Your chapter is short enough for fast reading.
3) The story is interesting. So a person would like to go back and read it from the beginning.
Good work my friend. Please continue writing.

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi dear Harry;

I had a chance to read your very poem "Primitive Instincts". You are definitely correct. We modern humans might be higher in intelligence from dogs, deer, and other animals. We still do use our "Primitive Instincts" successfully. I liked your poem for the following reasons.
1) Interesting Title.
2) The length was short enough for fast reading. We modern humans do not have much time lately.
3) It originality.

You are a very good poet. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi my dear DahDuhNah;

I enjoyed reading your story "The Price of a Mile". It has all the elements of a good war story. The followings are the reasons;
1) An interesting tile.
2) it has originality.
3) The characters are very interesting.
4)The length is short enough for fast reading.



Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Take Me  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Nick;
Your Poem "Take Me" was very delicious. I do not know if you created for Halloween or I just happen to come across it on the Month of October. Anyway I did like your poem for the following reason.
1) It is original.
2) It tile makes the reader to continue.
Altogether it is a good poem. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review of Memorial  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Huntersmoon;

the title of your poem caught my attention. It was very nice of you to think about the unspoken heroes that gave so much for us to live in freedom. It was an emotional poem and I liked it very much. Your poem has the followings.
1) It has a very nice rhythm.
2)It has feelings.
You are a very good poet. Please keep writing poetry. You do have future in it.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review of Army Men  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Wildcard;

I saw the title of your short story and said to myself I need to read this. I could not stop reading so the followings are what I am thinking about your story.
1) Interesting title.
2) motives the reader to read whole through.
3) It does have the elements of surprise.
You have matured in writing. so, please do keep writing. Until I read more of your works.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Shaaara;

You chose a subject that no one has written about it before. I read your "Which Sense Would I Give Up?". It made me think. Which senses I would choice? Well, I hope I do not have to because all of them are necessary for our existence. However, when we reach the old age all the senses little by little is taking away from us anyway. The followings are what I think about your writing.
1) it is very inspirational.
2) It has an interesting subject.
4) It is short enough for fast reading.
5) you have developed your point of view into nice story.
I enjoyed reading your story and I do hope to read more of them soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Day and Night  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dan;

I started reading your poem and told myself I have to finish it. It is a very beautiful poem. I can go on to tell you that the poem needs rhythm, It needs good prose too. But I am not a publisher and it is not my job to correct you. So this is what I think about your poem. It captives the heart of the reader. And I believe this is the most important element for a good poem which, you have achieved it beautifully.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Web;

I was looking for something with the sense of humor to read and the title of your story Forget Maytag. Do the Roomba Rumba!" caught my attention. I found it well written and extremely funny. I tells the story of our high tech society. We have not become smarter, we are in the mercy of our technology. Here is what I think about your story.
1) It has a nice plot.
2) It has a nice structure, from the beginning it jumps right into the action.
3) It has an interesting character Roomba.
4) and interesting settings.
You are a good writer. Please keep writing. I do to read more of your works soon.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi;

Could someone please tell me what is a ticket? And what purpose does it service. and also when an item is invalid. Thank you so very much for your time.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi my dear Prosperous;

I read your very short poem. It told the story of someone very near to me that recently has been diagnosed with Alzheimer/ Dementia. It is a though thing to see your love one suffering and there is not much you can do. I do hope that one day the medical society can find a cure for it soon. I did enjoy your poem very much. It hit me right in the heart. Well done my dear.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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