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I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
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I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
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My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
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Review of Summertime  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi my dear Kymee;

I read your beautiful poem about your daughter. I do hope it is fiction. I have a love one that have become disabled. Therefore, I understand what you must be going through, if it is a true story. The followings are the reasons why I like your poem.
\1) It is very emotional.
2) This is the story of millions of people that have someone out of ordinary. The parents are the Lord's sent angles to earth for that especial child.
3) It is very well written.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alfred;

I enjoyed reading your poem "where the soul bleeds". It brings out the beauty and mystery of the magical forest out into the open. I liked your poem for the following reasons.
1) It was original.
2) It made the readers imagination go wild.

Well done my friend. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bscholl;

I was looking for something funny to read which my eyes caught your story. I must say it was what I needed. The followings are the reasons why I liked it.
1)A good title.
2) A good story should keep the reader reading.
3) It is original
4) It was short for fast reading.
You are a good writer. Please continue writing.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing .com
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Review of Hourglass  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1 ;

I had a chance to read your poem" Hourglass". It is very well written. I like the way you wrote the poem in the shape of hourglass. I liked it because it is original. It has a nice rhythm to it. It does come in the best order. It has precision. It is a wonderful poem and you are a great poet. I did enjoy reading it. Please keep up the good work.



Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello my dear J.A

I had a chance to read your chapter VIII "West Brookfield, MA - Chapter VIII". I must say without reading the pervious
chapters I can not do you justice. However, the followings are what I am thinking about your writing.

1) You have chosen a small historic town for your subject. Well, down. These little places with their hard working people are the backbone of America.
2) Your chapter is short enough for fast reading.
3) The story is interesting. So a person would like to go back and read it from the beginning.
Good work my friend. Please continue writing.

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Ahab's Obsession  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Teargen ;

Your poem is very sad but it shows the struggle of life. Humans going to the Ocean and trying to butcher the residence of the deep. The followings are the reasons I like your poem.
1) You chose an interesting subject.
2) it has a good rhythms.
You are a poet capable of brining tears or joy to your reader. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi dear Harry;

I had a chance to read your very poem "Primitive Instincts". You are definitely correct. We modern humans might be higher in intelligence from dogs, deer, and other animals. We still do use our "Primitive Instincts" successfully. I liked your poem for the following reasons.
1) Interesting Title.
2) The length was short enough for fast reading. We modern humans do not have much time lately.
3) It originality.

You are a very good poet. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi my dear DahDuhNah;

I enjoyed reading your story "The Price of a Mile". It has all the elements of a good war story. The followings are the reasons;
1) An interesting tile.
2) it has originality.
3) The characters are very interesting.
4)The length is short enough for fast reading.



Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Take Me  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Nick;
Your Poem "Take Me" was very delicious. I do not know if you created for Halloween or I just happen to come across it on the Month of October. Anyway I did like your poem for the following reason.
1) It is original.
2) It tile makes the reader to continue.
Altogether it is a good poem. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review of Memorial  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Huntersmoon;

the title of your poem caught my attention. It was very nice of you to think about the unspoken heroes that gave so much for us to live in freedom. It was an emotional poem and I liked it very much. Your poem has the followings.
1) It has a very nice rhythm.
2)It has feelings.
You are a very good poet. Please keep writing poetry. You do have future in it.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Alfred;

I was looking for something to read your poem came up on the screen. The title "words echoing forever" caught my attention. The reasons are as follows.
1) It is unique
2) It is a creative.
3) It has a good prose.
4) Makes the reader interested to read it.
You are a good poet. Please continue writing.

Sincerely.

Zheila, a member of writing.com.
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Review of Army Men  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Wildcard;

I saw the title of your short story and said to myself I need to read this. I could not stop reading so the followings are what I am thinking about your story.
1) Interesting title.
2) motives the reader to read whole through.
3) It does have the elements of surprise.
You have matured in writing. so, please do keep writing. Until I read more of your works.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Shaaara;

You chose a subject that no one has written about it before. I read your "Which Sense Would I Give Up?". It made me think. Which senses I would choice? Well, I hope I do not have to because all of them are necessary for our existence. However, when we reach the old age all the senses little by little is taking away from us anyway. The followings are what I think about your writing.
1) it is very inspirational.
2) It has an interesting subject.
4) It is short enough for fast reading.
5) you have developed your point of view into nice story.
I enjoyed reading your story and I do hope to read more of them soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Seabreze;
It is good to read one of your poems again. I see that you are maturing in writing poetry.. I read your poem "The Windmill, The Rabbit Hole and Time". Everything seems right on its place. Your poem bring the time of childhood innocence back again to mind. I loved it very much. A job very well done. Please keep writing.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review of Family Reunion  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Jezri;

I think that is what family gathering is about. To have fun. Well, I feel sorry for Seth. But seriously I liked your poem because it was fun to read and it had all the elements of a good poem. It had fun language. It took the readers journey to family gathering at the holiday seasons without holidays even been here. It was also short and sweet. Please do keep up the good work.
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Review of Day and Night  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dan;

I started reading your poem and told myself I have to finish it. It is a very beautiful poem. I can go on to tell you that the poem needs rhythm, It needs good prose too. But I am not a publisher and it is not my job to correct you. So this is what I think about your poem. It captives the heart of the reader. And I believe this is the most important element for a good poem which, you have achieved it beautifully.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Web;

I was looking for something with the sense of humor to read and the title of your story Forget Maytag. Do the Roomba Rumba!" caught my attention. I found it well written and extremely funny. I tells the story of our high tech society. We have not become smarter, we are in the mercy of our technology. Here is what I think about your story.
1) It has a nice plot.
2) It has a nice structure, from the beginning it jumps right into the action.
3) It has an interesting character Roomba.
4) and interesting settings.
You are a good writer. Please keep writing. I do to read more of your works soon.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi;

Could someone please tell me what is a ticket? And what purpose does it service. and also when an item is invalid. Thank you so very much for your time.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi my dear Prosperous;

I read your very short poem. It told the story of someone very near to me that recently has been diagnosed with Alzheimer/ Dementia. It is a though thing to see your love one suffering and there is not much you can do. I do hope that one day the medical society can find a cure for it soon. I did enjoy your poem very much. It hit me right in the heart. Well done my dear.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Weekly Goals  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi everyone;

I am very busy with an elderly father who is not feeling himself. So my goal is that with in taking care of him which, is a full time job to write a few pages about a new article that I planning to post within a month.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Looking for Love  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi G.B

The title of your story " Looking for Love" caught may attention. I had to read it. I always thought I am among the few who is looking for true love but, true love runs away from me. I never had that charming prince in love with me. So, I read about it in the books. And now at the older age I end up taking care a father with dementia/ Alzheimer. I guess I am born to give love and never received it.

Your story was very emotional.
It was well written.
It was very short but, spoke the life misery.
I did enjoy reading your story very much. I do hope to read more of your works soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Peculiar dialogue  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sophine:

It was a great pleasure to read your writing. You are without a doubt will be a great author if you keep writing. The followings are what I think about your writings:
1) the idea is very original.
2) The two characters have been defined well.
3) I believe a writer would fall in love or, hate the characters that he or she has created.
4) The length for fast reading was sufficient.
4) You gave your characters life which, is very important because the reader feels them as being alive.
A very good job my dear. Please keep on writing.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Pumpkin;

I read your story "Brickeys, Halls and others", it is very interesting, and well written. I liked it very much when you wrote the branches by numbers. How ever it would have been more enjoyable if you have mentioned at the beginning who these people are? Thank you so very much for a delightful story.



Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi my name is Zheila;

Please tell me how to go to forum to post a contest. Thank you so very much for your time.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Indelibleink;

I read your "Greg Gumshoe: Private Eye - Chapter 6 ". I enjoyed it very much. It had all the elements that a good story should have. I liked it so much that I need to go back and read chapter 1. I always think that a story should have a little sense of humor which, yours had. A job very well done. I do hope to read more of your works soon.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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