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322 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Moo;

I had a chance to read your poem "Tragic Peanut Flutter", it was very funny ( in a good way) and I enjoyed reading it. Please do keep up the good work.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi dear Doremi;

I am not and export in poetry but I must say your poem was is very beautiful and alive. I am sure the teenagers will enjoy it very much. I do hope to read more of your other works soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Nicolas O Lapoint  
Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Bob;

The title of your story caught my attention because of the name "Nicolas O Lapoint". the more I read, the more I found out that your story is similar to the gossips when I was working in retail store. The name changes but, activity remains the same. In our store it was security that had extra activity. I liked your story and the followings are what I thought about it.
1) It is a well written story.
2) a very funny story.
3) The length was good for fast reading.
4) You have a gift for writing comedy.
I do hope to see more of your works soon. Please keep writing.


Sincerely,
Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Magoo;

I had a chance to read your beautiful poem. I did enjoyed it very much. It has rhyme. It really made me laugh. You write well. I liked it very much. Please do keep up the good work. I do hope to read more of your works soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of ICEBERG  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jayson;

I read your story "ICEBERG". I would like to mention that I read it without noticing any grammar mistakes. I am not a teacher of English language. And by practice hard one can improve grammar mistakes. I gave my judgments base of what I felt about your writing and here are the followings.

1) Interesting title.
2) Does bring the tragedy of Titanic vividly to mind.
3) The reader wants to keep reading.
4) A very nice ending.
I thought your are a good writer. Please keep on the good work. I hope to read more of your writings soon.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Rain of Terror  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow

I read your poem, I just loved it. The followings are my opinion about it.
1) Interesting title.
2) Beautifully written.
3) Short enough to read.
Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review of My Child  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Poney Tale;

I did not have children so, I can relate to your poem. I read your "My Child" and this is what I think about it.
1) The tile is very catchy.
2) explains child's actions beautifully.
3) The length was short enough.
I am not an export in poetry but, I did like your poem. Please keep writing.
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Review of Little Birdy  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Saurabh Dwivedi

I saw the title of your poem and I thought to myself I have to read it. The followings are what I thought about it.
1) Very nice title.
2) The rhythm goes fine together.
3) A very funny poem.
4) well written.
5) The length was short enough for fast reading.
A very well done job. I do hope to read more of your writings in the future. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Letter to the Cat  
Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Kuro;

I saw the title of your article " Letter To The Cat". I thought I must read this because I do own a dog. The followings are my thoughts.

1) Very nice beginning.
2) I liked the conversation with your cat.
3) Nice idea to describe cats behaviors.
4) Wonderful ending.

You are a good writer. Please keep writing. Have a great day.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Symbols  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Jman;

I was going through the stories that I saw the title of "Symbols". It caught my attention. I read it and like it very much. I just want to suggest that you add more to it. It is very short. Keep up the good work. I do hope to read more of your writings soon.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Too Hot to Handle  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Nixie;

I had a chance to read your beautiful story " To Hot to Handle". and the followings are what I thought of your writing.
1) You have started nicely.
2) Emotions between the two characters was well defined.
3) The ending was nice too.

You are a very good writers. Please do continue your work. I do hope to read more of your stories soon.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Tie Dye  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chlogan;

I read your poem " The Dye". and this is what I think about it.

!) Interesting title.
2) The poem rhymes beautifully.
3) It is done in a good test.
4) The length of poem is good.
5)It is understandable for everyone who reads it.
6) Nice ending.

It is a great job for the first time. I do hope to read more of your work soon. Please do keep up the good work.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of oneness  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jayson;

I did review your "oneness". And this is my suggestions.
1) Beautiful opening. "The early morning light had just opened the garden". I just could imagine all those beauties right in front of me.
2) Please forgive me, but your 3th paragraph does not support your first paragraph. You story is about "An interesting experience with nature while in a meditative state". What does " offer me a deal on auto insurance" has anything to do with nature and meditation. If you wouldn't mind please revise it.
3) I liked your ending.
5) altogether you did a very good job. Your are a very good writer. Please keep on writing. It was a pleasure to read your story.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Adorre;


I must say you are a very good writer. I did enjoy reading your "Interlude in the Sky". It has all the elements of surprise, and your opening statement is very strong. the reader is hooked. The story was very attractive. You can continue the story of what happens after the flight is over. I like to see more of your writings soon. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Drucco;

I started reading your story very slowly because I thought it needs more careful reading. Your story of "The Darkened Bridge" is perfect. It has a very nice tile, and opening. It is very professionally written. Story catches the attention of the reader. Reader wants to follow it until the end. You are a very good writer. Please do keep on going. You do have future in mystery writing. Have a great day.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Hooves;

I was very curious to read your "2013 Remooing Rules of Procedure" when I saw the title. You work very original and I thought that the length of the work was sufficient. Your work put some smile on my face. It was a job well done. I do hope to read more of your works soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Superguy;

I was looking for something new to read that the title of your story " I Saw A UFO On The Beach". caught me attention. Your story has a touch of sense of humor in it. Your story was very short. I was waiting to read more but suddenly you have stopped the story. I do hope that you start expending it. It is a very interesting story to read. There are so much materials about UFO everywhere that you will not have any problem with your research. Keep up the good work please. Have a great day.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Story Mistress;

My name is Zheila, a member of wiring.com. Two of my articles by the name of The Mysterious Montauk Base # 1904327 and Georgia Guide Stone has Worldwide Guides # 1894053 does not take ratings. I am wondering why? Is there any way that I can make them available for rating please. thank you so very much for your time.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi DancingStilletoes;

I had a chance to read your story "Wanna Kill Yourself?". it is a job well done. Most teenagers these days are preoccupied with silly little things such as being popular as cheerleader, or which girl wears which design dress, or if the captain of football team will ever look at her. Life has many wonders to offer. If we take time and look around us to and try to discover those wonders. Parents do love their children even though they sometimes hurt their children out of ignorance.

I liked the end of your story that you offered your help. I am sure this means a lot to someone that is confused and needs someone to talk to. May be your story can help a teenager in distress and think twice before committing suicide. Hope to read more of your stories. Have a great day.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Roni

I did have a chance to read "Believe What You See". I looked at it from the eyes of a teenagers. They really love this type of stories. Your story is well written and has the power of enough attraction for the reader to follow it. My teenager years way past over, if I like it I am the teenagers will definitely love it. Please do keep up the good work, and I do hope to read the rest of your story soon.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Inkwell;

I read your intro to "The Journey To The Lost World- intro". You have started your story with a nice title. And makes one to read more. I believe that you definitely need to expand the story. Good work. I do hope to read the rest it soon. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Socalscribe;

I read your story of " The Wayward Cataphiles." Although I like to read a lot, but I have never heard of "catacombs of Paris." This is something I learnt from your story. Frankly I do not believe in faeries and pixies. But I also did not think Jinns exist either. But when I did search on line Google showed too many books about Jinns. There are stories in Bible and Islam about Jinns.So your story about bad and good faeries and pixies might be true. All you need to do it is to prove it. It was very well written and I liked it very much. Good job.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of College Story  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Library_guy ;

The title of your story took me back to my collage days. How many hours did I spent in the College store to look for the required materials. I start reading your story and liked it very much. Especially when you saved the turtle. There are so many cruelty against poor animals these days. I am hoping that may be your readers become aware that animals have emotions and the right to live as we do and stop hurting and passing over their little bodies in the middle of the road. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Garden Paradise  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dobie mom;
I read your story for the following reasons:
1) I was looking for a title to grab my attention. Yours was the one.
2) The story was in a good length.
3) Very original.
4) very spooky.
5) Very well written.

Please keep up the good work and keep writing. You do have future in writing.

Sincerely,

Zheila , a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hi Alex;

I read your prologue " The Hidden Allies" I liked it very much. I am looking forward to read the rest of it soon. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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