|A very descriptive writing from a writer trying to better hherself in the english language.
I thought the over all story was nciely done. There are errors, but by the end of the atory the writer has come forth informing all readers with a honest and sincere jesture.
English is a difficult language, what works here, doesn't worh there, this word can be said this or that way. A complex sintax.
Overall, I enjoyed this little story about the writer and her two friends. Keep writing Star. It won't be to long before you are writing more and more.
A 4.5 for honesty and attempt.