I'm not qualified to give professional advice, but will share my thoughts and opinions. My reviews are intended for positive feedback and to give you another point of perspective, never to belittle or instill negative feelings.
Overview: A lot of emotion, and powerfully written.
Strength: You use a nice play with words and portray a lot of feeling.
Questions: Does it flow as smoothly as you would like? Is the format set right? Try reading it out so you can both listen and say it. I received this advice from another here and it has helped me a lot.
Review: This is a nice piece of poetry. It's something most can relate to, and it's written well. Poetry gives a lot of freedom to express ourselves, and to let a lot out. Nice job.
"Reading soothes the soul, writing sets it free." TJ
I'm not qualified to give professional advice, but will share my thoughts and opinions. My reviews are intended for positive feedback and to give you another point of perspective, never to belittle or instill negative feelings.
Overview: A nice poem and tribute to some of the great singers/songs.
Strength: Fun to read, easy to relate too, well for me. Nice flow and well composed.
Questions: Am I really old enough to know all these?
Review: A great poem and tribute, nicely done. Makes me want to put a record on...
"Reading soothes the soul, writing sets it free." TJ
I'm not qualified to give professional advice, but will share my thoughts and opinions. My reviews are intended for positive feedback and to give you another point of perspective, never to belittle or instill negative feelings.
Overview: Great poem. The rhythm is great, it's worded great, and it clear.
Strength: great rhyme, great flow, touch of humor.
Questions: Is there some punctuation right? Is it too much or not enough? Ha (I could resist)
Review: A great little poem that I not only enjoy, but relate well with. Great job.
"Reading soothes the soul, writing sets it free." TJ
I'm not qualified to give professional advice, but will share my thoughts and opinions. My reviews are intended for positive feedback and to give you another point of perspective, never to belittle or instill negative feelings.
Overview: Nice, well written, good flow.
Strength: You have a powerful subject and portray with great energy. You use great description and form.
Questions: In reading, there are a few places that kind of catch a bit. Nothing I can point out, as it could be me, the reader, just as easily as the poem. Some advice I just received in a review of one of my poems is to read it out and listen for those rough spots. I may work for you, too.
Review: I enjoyed reading this, I agree with your thoughts on fate and destiny, and I think you did a great job in portraying your thoughts. Great job!
"Reading sooths the soul, writing sets it free." TJ
Very well written, very entertaining and it moves great throughout. I'm reminded of Dr. Seuss with the wit and charm you use and the spectacular rhythm and rhyme. Great job.
Hey, this is a great piece. It says a lot, and it says it quite well. It takes less than a minute to say, "Thanks," and only a few to give some feedback with it. I liked the subject, the writing was great, the word choice is good, and the only thing I would say on a negative not is the use of smaller type in parenthesis. It kind of draws the attention away from the main subject in my opinion, and leaves me wondering if this is stated or only a thought your sharing. All in all, a good read, you have a great subject and your focus stayed right on track from start to finish.
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