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Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'd like a little more information on the background of this sonnet, but what you have here is clear and helpful, thanks for sharing!


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Review of Lisa's Gardens  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ha! This is definitely my kind of story. I love what you do in such a short space. Great description and absolutely love the twist! Great job!


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Review of Saving Light  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed the imagery of this poem, as it was clear to what you were trying to evoke. Great job!


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Review of Whitewashed  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a creative take on this prompt--I love that you took the historical route! I love your attention to detail and the twist is terrific. Going back and reading it a second time, I think I'd like a little more clarified setup as to how he could have said white washed for the entire place because I think of the chapel as one location, but I think you are insinuating there are multiple rooms/buildings where this renovation is being done. This is a small aspect though and you only had a short time to whip this together. The important thing is I thoroughly enjoyed myself and I think you'll do very well in today's competition *Smile* Thanks for sharing!


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Review of Patiently Waiting  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really loved this poem. The perfect image of an affectionate and patient dog waiting for his/her master. You really captured that essence. Great work. Jealous of people who can write poems!


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Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
What an absolutely adorable poem! *Smile* Congrats on your win!
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Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this! I'm sucked right back into your story. This new turn of events is very intriguing. can't wait to see what happens next!
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Review of Space Outing  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow this is an awesome poem. I stink at poetry and especially rhyming, and I love the combination of A-Z and rhyming motif. On top of that, you took a really inventive take on this prompt. Great job!
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Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful piece! I love the narration and how you juxtapose actual magic with "magic" that the character does not understand but thinks is so mysterious. I also like the darkness that comes with this piece-- you know that this man may not be proposing what she thinks he is offering and may have a sinister purpose, to use and discard her. Anyway, wonderful work and a well deserved win.
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Review of Caribbean Snooze  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the lilting verses that remind me of a rocking boat putting someone to sleep. Great job!
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Review of The Fog  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks again for reviewing my story. I loved this story of yours-- beautiful, haunting and the words washed over me. The only thing I would like more of is the main character's reaction to the girl's story. Great imagery, I felt the man's pain as he goes through discovering what actually happened. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Reading  
Review by Kimberly Kate
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this story! Poor mischa... And what a perfect name for a fortune teller!
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