Gripping! The ending kind of sends shivers down my spine! A very excellent piece of writing, and will keep me out of caves for the rest of my life! You show extraordinary talent and imagination, your words grip the reader (me, in this case) and holds until the end.
I think Sal should get out of that cave and then do a dynamite it. Horribly enchanting piece of work!
Countrymom
Excellent write, and I love the idea of "A Bit Of An Obit"! Seriously, at 66 3/4, I have given some thought to an obituary. I've read enough of them in my day as I'm next to the last of nine children in my family.
SO - without further adieu, I shall toddle off to write a bit about my obit, smiling all the way. It's been a good life, sprinkled with a few tears and spiced with laughter and love.
You really have to ask? I spend 1/3rd of my LIFE here! I love this site too pieces! It has given me inspiration, pride in my work, and the enjoyment of reading others! The contests are the best!
God bless!
Countrymom
Thank you so much for sharing this lovely verse! I think sometimes our words are inspired by Him, and it is a joy to know that you are really a "Kingskid"!
Take care and God bless!
Countrymom
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as I'm next to the last of nine children in my family.
I spend 1/3rd of my LIFE here! I love this site too pieces! It has given me inspiration, pride in my work, and the enjoyment of reading others! The contests are the best!