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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ree,

I have read "Thoughts on Blogging"  and I give you my thoughts.

Technically, I think this is the only error that I came accrossI' not too comfortable with that thought. Looks like you forgot the m.

I find out that a lot of writers are private. I'm not. I love blogging, but haven't here. I just turn them into a nonfiction piece here. Personally, I enjoy sharing everything about myself. Just thought I'd give you my opinion on the subject.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello RN,

I have read "Not Everything Is As It Seems" and I would like to share my thoughts on this.

Technically, this was well thought out and put together, with no errrors.

The subject is something I agree with, even though I am straight. I agre with everything you said in here and I really don't see what the big problem is. Maybe some day....

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of A Ghost Story  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Dragon,

That is awesome. That kind of thing may scare some people, but I would think it would be well, like I said...awesome. I wish I could go on a navy ship.

Technically, this was well written. I didn't notice any kind of mistake.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Dennis,

This was terrific. When I got to the end, it was even better when I saw that she was real. I happen to be half an hour from St. Louis. When I'm there though, I go party by the arch, I don't go to graveyards. If I did though, I would tell you if she's buried there. I should make a special trip to that cemetary.

I thought the poem was flawless and had a great rhytm.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of The Door  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Lone wolf,

I loved this. It was really short and was a great subject matter. The pattern was good and I didn't notice any errors.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of The Questioner  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Jesse,

This was very interesting and well put together. I think you did great at not repeating wwords.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of myself  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello maanasha,

You really ought to expand on this one sentence. Tell more about yourself.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Baby Boy  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Eliot,

I have read "Baby Boy"  and I offer you my thoughts.

Five kids! Yikes. At least you didn't have to birth them. How many more you want? lol

This was short and well written. I loved the very end.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Robin,

I have read "A Bit About Sweetie"  and I offer you my thoughts.

Reading the description, I had no idea what to expect. I was pleasantly surprised. My favorite part is that he sings one of my favorite songs. What would have been real cool, is if this interview really happend. ......Or did it?

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Mr. Snood  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Bill,

I have read "Mr. Snood"  and I offer you my thoughts.

This was a nice blend of funny, weird and kind of sick. (I thought the end was the sick part) As always, great job!

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello aralls,

I have read "The Day I Made My Mother Speechless"  and I offer you my thoughts.

This was good. I loved how you built everything up with all the thoughts as the narrator held the green beans. My favorite part was of course the ending.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Stallion,

Nice little poll. I voted other though. I think you should have the option all of the above. haha. Other than that, very good.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of The Admin Issue 1  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello JP!

I have read "The Admin Issue 1"  and I offer you these suggestions.

First impression:The description is what hooked me in.


What I liked most: The ending. I loved your description of Jesus. lol




Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: At some points, you have the word hell. In lowercase. Since that is a place, it needs to be capitalized.



Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Santa Speaks  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Beck! I have read "Santa Speaks"  and I give these suggestions.

First impression: I was wondering what you did with the prompt for the contst. As I started to read I was amused.


What I liked most: The whole thing. The ending was great. I entered this contest this round. If you don't win though, I will be surprised. You deserve it.






Write on,

Jenny
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Review of The Streak  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello Jace!
I have read "The Streak"  and I give these suggestions.

First impression: I would have loved to participate in something like that. Take off my and run around in some place public and not get in trouble? You bet!


What I liked most:I thought the very end is what wrapped it up nicely. Well, nicely for a read. Not for that guy that no one helped.





Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling:I thought everything was just fine. Great stuff.



Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Hot Drama Poll  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello Steph,

As far as my answer goes, I voted A Christmas Story.

Now to be a critic..... None of those listed are dramas. Dramas don't just have to do with acting. Dramas are on a more serious side. Movies like The Shawshank Redemption, 12 Angry Men, and Pulp Fiction are considered to be dramas. The only actual drama I think you have listed is It's A Wonderful Life. Maybe The Polar Express. The others are comedies. I hope this helps and doesn't offend or anything. I just think you should change it to beter suit the titles. Just my opinion though.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Matt,

Just when I think I've come upon a poll that's like none other, I find one that tops it. This poll is definitely unique and it is safe to say that I've never seen a poll like this.. I like it.

I voted that I would encourage. I actually dated a guy for a very brief time that dressed up for the Rocky Horror Picture Show. I thought "whatever".

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Hapenis  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Hunters!

I have read "Hapenis"  and I offer you these suggestions.

First impression:Well, my very first impression was the title. How could I not love that title? lol


What I liked most: While, I like a ton of poetry, hardly any poem makes me smile all through it. This one did. Well for one, I quite enjoy the topic. Another thingn is that this was written with a good sense of humor.




Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling:You had the line your remind me of your purpose as I pass through each day. You should make your into you.




Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Holiday Dinner  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Mike,

Thanks for entering my contest. I hope to see you here again.

This prompt was cable tv shows. You got about half right. I am pretty sure the other half are shows on in sindication, like Yes, Deer. What About Bob, Bachelor Party, and She's Got The look are movies, not cable shows.

Needless to say, I am awarding you with second place. I did enjoy the story. The 3.5 rating is due to the sindicated shows and movies. I do hope to see another entry from you in the future.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Hunter,

I'm glad that you entered this contest. I was happy to read your entry. It was just what I was looking for. Those are the types of shows I was talking about. Some people were just confused about that for some reason.

I am giving first place to you. I hope to see you here again.

*Smile* write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello Stallion,

I chose the "who the hell are you?" option although my answer isn't up there. Here's my answer: If he was dressed in simple jeans and a t shirt, I'd probably hit on him. Just thought I'd share.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Gene,

I have read "Supernatural Stereotypes"  and I offer you my thoughts.

This was a good poll, but I think you should have specified somewhere that you were talking about fiction. I say that because I really enjoy supernatural nonfiction.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Hoshi,

I have read "Popular Internet Videos"  and offer you my thought.

This was very good and you put the correct kinds of words, to put in the blank spaces. That is what made this a great mad lib.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Kenzie,

I have read "A Peanut Butter Life"  and I would like to share my thoughts.

This short little piece was very well written. I enjoyed reading about your dad's love of peanut butter that you inherited. The part about Thanksgiving was funny, in my opinion.

I would only put peanut butter on crackers or celery. I might try it on the stuff you mentioned, if I was dared and napkins were close by. As far as my favorite food; tough call. I love lasagna (& other italian dishes} I love Mexican, and I love cheeseburgers.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Who was Jesus?  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Andres,

I chose other. This is a question, that I have no idea about the answer. I've heard many things. The only way anyone would really know the answer, is to go back in a time machine. Questions like this always make me think; which is why I rated it a 5.

Write on,

Jenny

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