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102 Total Reviews Given
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Words to live by...
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very different kind of piece...my gf struggles with weight. Best to just do things very slowly until you're back to where your body wants to be (if you're over that). Everything else is a struggle against nature itself.
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Review of Loving You  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very sweet..
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Review of My voice  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hints of Gwen Brooks...nice!
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Review of Noisy Neighbors  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Bwahaha...
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Review of Pinetop Perkins  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sounds very Hughes-ian:)
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Review of Ten  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great piece!
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Review of Lab Boy  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great potential for a novel...
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Review of When You're Near  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this, but I would chose a rhyme scheme and stick to it or use free verse...the expectation of a couplet that fails to materialize can be jarring.
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Review of Butchie Cox  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it...a "Stand by Me" type story.
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
A widowers group?...very moving:)
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
My gf has always told me I should write an emoji novel:)
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Another Planet of the Apes installment?
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Review of Castle  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (3.0)
Is this finished? Not much to go by...
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Review of Dawn  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great imagery!

*ethereal
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Review of Mice Of Men.  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Quite a manifesto...
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Review of Delores  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Deliciously eerie:)
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Review of Acting  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
The Harrison Ford story?
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hope springs eternal...
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Review of Symbiosis  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very impressive...last stanza flows a little less well than the earlier ones but still well crafted.
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Review of Razor-blade  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Impressive imagery...love the structure!
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Review of February 29th  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great imagery!
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Review of The Things  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
One of the first things I've read here that sounds professional.
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Review of The Haunting Hero  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow....very powerful!
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love the last line...
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