This was beautiful and drew me in. I enjoyed reading this a few times. I thought about the greed harbored in society that would use our curiosity and exploit our insecurity to trap us in their vice. - Not sure this is what you meant to write about, but our individuality filters our perception. - Write on.
I felt welcomed into your story. I enjoyed your prose, especially the second paragraph. It read like poetry. I sank into the language like the cushion of a chair that swallows you whole. My shoulders relaxed, and I felt my eyes use less energy.
Open-ended short stories excite me, but I hope you continue this one. I like where it took my imagination. Thanks again!
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