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147 Public Reviews Given
156 Total Reviews Given
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Being your reader, then your other eyes.
I'm good at...
Discovering the psychology of a writer and the effect of the work on the reader. The effect on the reader is all that matters to me. Also, I'm not a grammar giant, so don't expect much.
Favorite Genres
Adventure, Action, Fantasy and SciFi.
Least Favorite Genres
Romance. No romance.
Favorite Item Types
Poems, novels and blog articles.
Least Favorite Item Types
Erotic articles.
I will not review...
Any romance, because I just hate reading it, and because it does no good to anyone. I agree you might not understand. Thanks.
Public Reviews
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting. Captivating since the discovery of the vials and his presumption of its source.

Flowing, simple and straight to the point. Even carried with it the voice of a male writer. I don't have to check if I'm wrong 😂

My opinion on the empty bottle is: since this guy lived in the future of the time it was sent in, how did he know it was a joke. I wasn't convinced. I plucking out my pipe from gobbling down the explanation that would've satisfied me for once. We writers explain things that way sometimes, but it makes our character more than human and all-knowing. 🙂

Greetings.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a jolly poem. I even heard bells jingle as you spoke. The world there shined forth is jolly. The jingles, the bells, the sweet nature.

I also beheld something else: you didn't struggle much to keep rhyming when the words seem no where around. You stuck to passing the message. That's interesting.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
I read this.

Greetings.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
😂 So sad the villain was male. I wouldn't wanna be him; he really did have a bad day in the hands of super Sophilia.

I hated his actions because of how he kept the world gloomy. I'm glad it was just a story. No one wants him anywhere near the doors of reality.

Is the story yet in progression?

Greetings.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (5.0)
Phew. I liked listening to this lady. Her voice and effect got me reading. Who wouldn't?

As a male, my own heart has been through a lot, so it seems I keep away from getting attached, because I fell in love with a playmate in my junior years, who didn't care if I died or lived, and I spent up to ten years(?) recuperating, after crying on my own for long. She's a lawyer now, married and working in Britain.

I think that the moving on with the girl of the man isn't to make her keep doing that. If he cares about his wife, he's sad, but doesn't wanna be alone either.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sounds like a kind of... personal writing.

And, you would do well as a teacher. Are you?

Finally, you sound beautiful (that is, my stereotypical beautiful ladies voice).

Thanks and Greetings.
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Review of Soldiers  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This clearly shows the folly of war.

Some present countries are arriving at the development zone presently, but because their minds themselves are still undeveloped, they presume they've gotten that with which to take their place in the world, which 'place' they gain through bullying, being impolite and aching to show forth what they have in store. If you've seen old Kung Fu movies, you'll discover that newly trained disciples and some fame hunting masters desire duels. Very imature.

The headstones serve as eternal testimonies to the folly of war. Nature remembers, so generation after generation.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.0)
What kind of things do people put up in that platform? It seems there is no section of this instruction that talks exactly about that very matter.

Also, how can one publicize the post within the site? Thanks in advance.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Situations show us who we are, ridding of our comfort zone.

I don't know whether you meant it that he was moving forward now and doing something with his life; I'm confused.

Yet this story is hurtful, because it shows one of those pains people pass through: cheating fiancee.
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Review of Paradise Island  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
Reality is fact, one's facts are already known possibilities. Imagination that exists within the perimeter of facts we accept is what we call 'good imaginations'. Anything beyond that, we call 'insanity' or 'delusion'.
Yet, as you said, imagination is the first step towards accomplishment.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really wish that the initial shared understanding remains to the end. But it seems that they of these age are making mistakes in their approach to romance, and most of all, marriage. The teaching is, 'You like him/her? Then go for it!' Yet our elders of past ages didn't all marry out of infatuation, but their marriages lasted better than ours. Why?
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Glad I didn't cry.

She was hallucinating, but that state brought her fake comfort and tears - tears she should've she'd and forgotten long ago. Nice piece.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Some pilot eh? Hmm... 🤔
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "The Review Mixer" 
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks a lotly 🙂
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree that the society is misled by fake expectations. Girls should walk naked...men that lust after them are to be blamed, bla bla bla
But that's unrealistic. If female bodies don't look attractive to men or arouse them, there would be no babies. 🤷
I agree there should be self control, but women should dress modestly.
Until we start doing things with deep understanding of our nature's, some things won't cease.
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting.
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Review of Homelessness  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nice work.
I think that we all play a part to make others homeless, because of how we treat the poor and pay our workers. If you sit back and think, you would see this too.
This write-up is revelational to me. Thanks.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good to know
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Interesting group.
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Review of Please Review  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
I want to get reviews. How do I do that?
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
That treatment of the black guy made me cringe, Floyd's case still fresh.
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Review of The Neighbour  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Looks like a normal story, but interesting too.
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Review of Prohibition  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Creative
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'm stranded here. Can someone help me?
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