Well written, I enjoyed reading you work. Only one issue I discovered, a simple typo - the sentence "I now that true" should now be know? and should that be thats? Good work and I look forward to reading more of your work. I'm sending you 100 GPs and write-on!
Your piece was interesting reading but enjoyable. In the first paragraph: " I’m sure they know I existence" I believe the word is exist. The last paragraph: "clearing his throat at thirsty second intervals" I believe the phrase is thirty second. Good work and write-on.
You work was well written, and I enjoyed reading it. It is always good to write your feelings, it gives you a good prospective on where you are at. Good work and write-on. I'm sending 75GPs.
Very well written, and your thoughts were greatly transposed onto your words. I am not a poet but i greatly enjoyed reading your work. Good job and Write-On. I'm sending you 75 GPs.
I enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. I am not a poet so I lack a little in reviewing skills for your type of writing. I will tell you that your piece was well thought out and well written. I hope to read more of your writings. God Bless You and I have included 100 GPs.
This was a good short story, well thought out. I enjoyed the way you built up the momentum and ended with the climax. Well written, and I hope to read more of your writings. Write-on.
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