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I am glad that I came across this piece. Let your voice be heard! No one should try to silence you or criticize your speech. We all have the right to speak our words. Keep taking chances!
I found this in Read & Review. I really enjoyed reading your story. I was locked in from the very beginning. I think this is a very good shell to a much longer story. I was honestly intrigued and I wanted the story to continue.
I found this in Read & Review, I enjoyed reading this piece. With limited words you were able to give the reader an idea of the emotions felt, hopefully other people out there will be able to connect to this poem like I have.
I found this in Read & Review, This was a very enjoyable read. With limited words you were able to give the reader an idea of the emotions felt, and allowing people to connect to this poem. Even though it was a short poem you were able to create so much depth.
I found this in Read & Review, It is never easy to find the words to express our feelings when there are no words that can fully capture the depth of what we’re feeling and yet, somehow you were able to convey that.
I found this in Read & Review, I enjoyed the way you were able to add such specific details. Because of those details you were able to paint a vivid picture of what was happening throughout the story. I really enjoyed the way it was written.
I found this in Read & Review. The story is well written with no obvious flaws. It is quite a powerful piece of art. This piece gets its meaning across and sends the readers on a historical journey. Why must we make the same mistakes over and over again?
I found this in Read & Review, it seemed to be worth a read and it was.
This story feels like a well written memory. I absolutely love this story in lots of ways. You were able to give the reader an idea of the emotions felt, allowing people to connect.
I enjoyed the way it was written and I felt that this piece could resonate with many people. There is a subtle mystery to it that I find intriguing. I believe that there is a deep message here for many to interpret their our way. What an incredible journey to go on.
Thank you for sharing your craft!
Adherennium,
This was a very enjoyable read.
I enjoyed the way you were able to add such specific details.
Because of those details you were able to paint a vivid picture of what was happening throughout the poem.
It is never easy to find the words to express our feelings when there are no words that can fully capture the depth of what we’re feeling. I only hope your memories sustain you through this difficult time. My deepest sympathies to you, I wish you peace and comfort as you grieve.
This was a very enjoyable read.
I enjoyed the way you were able to add such specific details.
Because of those details you were able to paint a vivid picture of what was happening throughout the story.
I enjoyed the way it was written and I felt that this piece could resonate with many people. There is a subtle mystery to it that I find intriguing. I believe that there is a deep message here for many to interpret their our way. What an incredible journey to go on.
Ken,
This was a very enjoyable read. You are correct “life does exists beyond our vision” and we rarely take the time to think about it let alone try to communicate it to others.
This motivates me (and hopefully others) to take a deeper look into the magic of things.
Thank you for sharing your craft.
Wow, what a great family story! 🙂 It was a story that many people could relate to and that is powerful. So many wonderful and tiny details, it really made this story feel warm and inviting. I enjoyed how many different things happened in just 431 words. 👍
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