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Review of Seventy-Six  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This story was fast paced and immensely suspenseful. I really enjoyed reading it. It grabs the attention of the reader early on and never lets up. I have never thought about numbers in this way before. You have done an amazing job creating this story.
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Review of Opened Eyes  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was an amazingly well written poem. I found that it sounds like what I have also gone through. With this piece I think you could help others who have faced similar things that you have. It is very important to remember to keep our faith and never give up on ourselves. I loved this poem!
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time there was a princess who loved to read.Everyday,she would spend hours with her nose stuck in a book. One day, to her horror all the books vanished.She frantically searched through the castle.There was no sign of her books. Because of that,she actually took the time to look around the castle. Until finally,she made her way to the garden. It was then that she realized how much she had missed by being inside all the time reading.
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Review of Forever and Ever  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written and makes one stop to think about their lives. It has a simplicity to it that grabs the reader and never lets them go. Anyone can enjoy reading this piece. I found it to be relatable as well as a joy to read.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was very heartfelt. It expresses well the love you had for your grandfather. It is never easy to lose someone we are close to. The raw emotion of this piece seeps through every word. The reader can feel the writer's pain.I think people will be able to read this piece and relate to the feelings within it. Very good job on this.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! That was amazing! I was hooked from the beginning and couldn't stop reading. This was a very intriguing and spooky tale.I really enjoyed it. I love how the ghost got her revenge. I did notice a few errors that will be fixed once you edit.Nothing major just some misspellings. Other than that, I loved this story.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved this poem. As an advocate against child abuse it really hit home with me. I wish there were more people who would take a stand against this senseless violence. This poem speaks well of how victims of child abuse are left feeling. It makes the reader stop and think what would I do in this situation. This is one I would red over and over and share with others to help spread the word about child abuse. Great work!
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Review of Dark Scribe  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found that I could relate to this poem. Your words made me remember a time when I went through depression. They genuinely express what a person suffering from depression goes through. This poem makes you think about those feelings and also makes you wonder how you could ever overcome them.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can completely relate to this poem. It reminds me of my father. He was never around and this poem says well how I have felt on numerous occasions. This is a poem that I would read over and over again. You have expressed exactly how a child feels when their father abandons them. I love this!
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Review of Twin Fathers  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (4.5)
Short and simple, yet very interesting. I haven't read too many poems about music. This was excellent. It made me stop and think about the message behind the words. I love it when a poem makes me think like that.I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job!
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Review of Night Music  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting read. I love the sounds of windchimes blowing in the wind. It is such a beautiful sound and amazing at putting one to sleep. This poem was well-written and very different from what I normally read. I enjoyed it very much. Excellent work!
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Review of Twisted  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very interesting poem. I really enjoyed the message behind this one. It takes you to a place where we all seem to go at one point or another over our lifetimes. It was well written and though it was dark, it was enjoyable at the same time. I can relate to this piece of work. It would be a poem I would read again and again.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I really like this poem! It was wonderfully written and the words speak volumes. It shows how we as adults still use the silent treatment when we get angry, just as we did as kids. It is a very relatable piece of work that anyone can enjoy. Amazing work!!!
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very intersting subject to write about. I really enjoyed it though. I love dreamcatchers! They are both beautiful and magical. I believe they protect our dreams from evil. Short and sweet, this poem is great! It is well written and very ingaging.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem describes very well how life really is on the streets. You really get into the readers head with this one. I felt the pain they were going through and my heart was breaking for them. This piece was well written and can really make people stop and think.
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Review of Behind The Door  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This poem really speaks to anyone who writes poetry. I found it to be very well written and it says so much about the poet's mind. Anyone who writes poetry should be able to relate to this piece. I thought it was quite enjoyable. It is a poem that all poet's wish they could write.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. It was fun and entertaining. I would expect to see something like this in a children's holiday book. It would be perfect to read to a child at bedtime. This poem works to bring joy to kids and the young at heart. You did a wonderful job!!!
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Review of Lacey's Umbrella  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, what asweet little poem. It makes me think about my grandmother. It is very well written from a child's point of view.It would be great in a book of children's poetry. I haven't read a poem that takes me back to my childhood in a lot of years. This one took me back to those rainy days in a small town. Love it!!!
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Review of Alone in Life  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this! I think we have all felt this way at some point in our life. I know I've been there plenty of times. This was beautifully written.I found it to be very relatable. It reminds me of when I was younger, and actually there have been times in the last few years I have felt this way a lot.This was an amazing poem!!
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Review of That Look  
Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This is a poem that I can relate to. Anyone who has been hurt in some way could. It takes me back to a few years ago when I was hurt by a friend. It makes me think about what she did and helps me to remember that I no longer have to deal with her drama. Excellent poem!!
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for these. They are very helpful to us writers and I feel we could all benefit from them. You have taken the time to research these links and make them available to fellow writers. I'm sure it was time consuming work, but you stuck with it and created this great list.
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Review by Writergirl74
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this poem interesting and enjoyable to read. It seems to me like you are comparing the oragutan and giraffe to two friends who often have small differences. It sounds like the giraffe is always putting the orangutan down and never really believing in her friend. It was very well written.
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