This astounding piece floored me; do you suppose the blue fellow's found his wife, Susan, yet?
Why don't more people write about body farms?
They seem rife for horror, but for the life of me, I can't remember reading a scary piece that includes them.
Your creative use of opposing text colors to distinguish the nameless speakers is laudable.
On that subject, the realistic way you wrote the characters without revealing more than necessary was
And that subtle way you revealed the plot twist in one line was masterful(which I won't spoil).
My favorite line, "Uh huh. Sooo...you're growing bodies?", showcases not just the blue fellow's confused shock, but also the dark comedy of the piece.
This single line also slightly reminded me of the satirical horror b-movie, Motel Hell(1980), where the farmer buries his victims up to their necks in soil, snips their vocal cords, and fattens them up to make sausages from their remains(thankfully nothing like that's happening on the red fellow's farm!).
All in all, a fantastic story with flawless spelling and grammar, which flows so well it feels eerily familiar as if we the readers are eavesdropping on these two colored fellows conversation.
Good luck with the contest, and have a great day!
From your fan and friend-o,