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Review of The Micro Spy  
Review by veritas
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very curious interactive I have come across thus far. It has that weirdly popular shrinking motif that I have constantly come across, yet it does not have any erotic pleasures that most have written into their stories. That makes this an anomaly, how do you do it. I am impressed.
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Review of Preds and Prey  
Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This story seems to have just about everything that could make it go far, just a few more options to finish and it would be ready. Hope there is more to come and I'll be waiting for it, that is if anyone happens to find the inspiration they need to do so of course.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I look at the chapter number I have to wonder why, why can't all of the good interactives have just as many chapters as this one? But going through I believe it could still use some work when it comes to the choices one could make. For example there are several in which you have chosen the topic but the choices of who or what are numerous yet no one made a chapter where you become them. If we could make those stories and complete more topics then this could be a great read and fun item to play with.
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Review by veritas
Rated: E | (3.0)
I'm not that much of a fan when a human is the predator of a story, however this story is a rare one concerning season four where humans can become Digimon rather than having a Digimon partner making it the most unique season of all. Also this story seems to have been forgotten which came to my attention and needed my say, if this can be built upon and have some variety that could include other predators even have one of the humans become their Digimon and then be the predator then it could have a better chance in getting more interesting which I hope it will.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Here is an interactive that makes one want to strive for more as it is sad that this one ended up being neglected with only a few chapters still I believe that any and all can be inspired to continue with others so that there does not have to be more good stories with great potential being left alone and we can all have an enjoyable read. And honestly this was a good idea I am just hoping that more good stories will not repeat the same fate as this one in the long run.
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Review of It's The Law  
Review by veritas
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was an early part of the site that as is could have used some work as it is short, a bit rushed and the grammar could have used some work as have sentence quotations with their marks side by side with another sentence of the same time, another speech section that is, is a bit awkward. The story on the other hand was a bit offensive when it comes to views on women Digimon or not, but still good for a laugh on some people's ignorance meaning Lobomon and a bit of Mercurymon.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Ah, an old classic of this site, well it is good to see stories worth reading from the early years of the program and to see some hints to franchises that were part of my childhood such pleasant memories. Hopefully more will be built up from this onward as it has for the 10 years since this was published.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Here's hoping either the creator of this entire interactive or a curious writer continues this part because I would like to see an option where Pinkie brings in Fluttershy or not, willingly Jumps down their throats and/or comes to an option where she gets to swallow the growing alicorns or all three mares in one gulp. That would be excellent! And whether or not they are visible in her belly or cartoonishly disappear would make it even better. Can't put it into words that would describe it as a story or I would have done so.
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Review of Werewolf Invasion  
Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
At least someone is updating, comeon folks let those creative ideas flow if you can, I'm sure there are a few out there.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Good no human preds just the way I like it. Dragons are one of the best.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I find it impressive how far this interactive has gone, so many choices and chapters. And it makes me wonder why so many other good inter-actives have not reached this level. Well hopefully you'll inspire others to reach to your glory, well keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more.
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Review by veritas
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Slime preds are very underrated which is why it is annoying that few have updated it at all. Still very good ideas.
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