I can see why this was featured in the Romance Newsletter. I liked it alot. I think the last stanza could be reworked a bit, but it's still very good. Keep writing.
This was awesome!!! Thank you so much for writing this. I can see why your poem was featured in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter. Good Job! Keep up the great writing!
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Wonderful piece of writing. I think this captures what so many of us have thought and just weren't able to put into words. Who among us doesn't want to be different, to fly, to sing, to change our past mistakes, etc? I'm so glad that you wrote this. I look forward to reading some of your other writings as well. Good Job!!!