I loved the very descriptive nature of this very fine story. The paragraphs were great and created with a great respect to a fine text. I was grabbed in my soul with this beauyiful story. I would not change a thing about it except continue to write another and another, etc..
My friend, this is truly a perfect poem. I am deeply sorry for you loss and the pain you feel. Your poetry certainly comes from your soul as it is truly perfect.
Oh, I loved the rhyme and the rythym was very well done in this great poem. A great job with a beautiful style. No doubt the author wrote this as an expression from the heart.
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