This is quite sad and very motivational. Your poems are very beautiful and poetic and I hope to learn from you. I hope that someday when you need it most and fall down again even if you don't want to, someone will reach out for you. Although I'm not sure if this story is from a personal experience, best wishes to you! And be safe!
I definitely can relate to this poem and I think it's very harsh but wonderful. I see that you are new here and I hope you have a great time here! Although I must say... some of the interactive stories are about characters getting.. overfed. But its pretty enjoyable here and I hope you'll stick around. Anyway, I hope the poem and will wait for more!
It's funny that the ones who 'care' always show up a bit too late. Feels fishy and as if its only all about guilt. Knowing you pushed that person to the edge but it's not like they hated it, its just the guilt of saying it. I feel as if they have this little part deep inside that enjoyed it. It's funny how people say "go kill yourself," then go into screams and cries when you do.
Inside I know when people see my room, they judge. I can't shower every time but I try. And the happiness of knowing you wouldn't judge it makes me happy. To know there is someone else you can't do simple things. It's funny how we tell people to be happy but we never take the advice ourselves. You do seem as if you care about your well being and all I can say is I am happy. And I do hope we can get it together eventually.
Lmao, to imagine being so tiny and splats of droppings falling from the "sky" must be scary indeed. I am guessing it is the horse's droppings so it must be like a piece of land falling on top of you. Poor Tim and Tom. Horse droppings are already quite big enough 😂
Most say love is painful, but I say the feeling of knowing you are loved and you love then yet cannot bare the thoughts that have carved your soul and mind is the worst. I do not know if you are just writing this or are depressed but this is a beautiful poem c: I am sorry if I offend you in any way though! If I do, please tell me what I've done and I will apologize c:
That is one of the most relatable things I've ever read here, which makes it even better. Whether you actually feel like this or just writing it, you portrayed it very well. 5 minute friends happen to the most of us but I hope she/he gets a longtime forever friend soon. I am sorry if I did something wrong but I do not mean to c:
This story is very heart-aching and sorrowful yet so beautiful and happy. In her eyes see say her father breaking yet still trying to become someone from a story. Her mother trying to hide it all by the gifts she brought but she saw it and the fantasies and dreams of hers slowly changed. But in the moment when she saw her dad come out of the fire to save her dog that she cherished so much, she was reminded of why she thought her father as a hero. I'm sorry if that's not what the story meant but that's how I see it. Anyway, this is very beautiful and I do not mean to upset you. c:
I haven't heard of Dr.Seuss is so long and this poem you've created remind me of the memories that haven't been thought of as many years past. Thank you for the nostalgia I got from reading this. It truly is so beautiful, oh so wonderful, and funny c:
This poem inspired me to make a poem about fall so I thank you. I will dedicate it all to you because of how this beautiful inspired me to write it so. Each season is very special and you made me realize how much, which is a amazing ability to have. Maybe someday I also can inspire someone to write one too! c:
The fact that im aging and this really understands me is sad. I'm slowly forgetting about people I've once loved yet cannot call their names and features again. Aging is a really sad yet beautiful way of life. You really described it well. Only my dreams can show me what they once looked like but then I forget again. When you get older, its easier for you to break.
Oh my! This is a wonderful twist on the rhyme, although still so sweet and dark. Trumpty Dumpty might never come up again, for he fell off the wall he had tried to built. Anyway, this is a wonderful piece of writing. I hope you have more.. lol.
After you wrote your final page to "Smile!(Groan?) You know you love these," I decided to explore more of your stories and I definitely was not disappointed. This poem is very beautiful and a very well done poem. You really are an amazing writer. I hope to someday be as amazing as you. This story of someone who lost something so precious such as his memory which had been with him since the beginning and left after a incident. The speaker must be in sorrow.
"Freedom is a mirage. They lied and told us to live and you would be okay. 'You are free' but every thought and voice screams you should be dead. That you are a glitch. Something that even god would not answer. And you have to stay quiet and smile, as if it does not hurt. As if you can bend but never break. But you have already broken. And freedom you search is barely freedom itself. Because it will never come true." - Muii.ire
"Smiling depression is where you are awake and in hiding. Hiding from criticism and the guilt of the sacred word 'Depression.' It is where you are tired and smiling no longer becomes smiling. It becomes a mask. You are like a toy with a curve carved on the face. But to live you must die. Die on the inside but every cell throbbing and shouting you are alive. But by the time anyone realizes, its to late; and you have become numb." - Muii.ire
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