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1,669 Public Reviews Given
1,689 Total Reviews Given
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I look at the fun factor.
I'm good at...
Knowing what sells and Knowing what is good are my skills.
Favorite Genres
Murder mysteries.
Least Favorite Genres
Long sad stories.
Favorite Item Types
Murder She Wrote, Columbo and NCIS.
Least Favorite Item Types
Sad, tragic endings.
I will not review...
My obituary.
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Review of The Attic  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


As Alice falls through the rabbit hole, she wonders if she is falling
down or up? The decent into the unknown is always upsetting.
Try an experiment. Undress down to a bikini on an elevator with
spectators. Put your old cloths in a bag, then from another bag
put on your new cloths. Judge the reaction.
I use to work at Filiens Basement. Women would undress on the
sales floor and try on wedding dresses. It was awsome.

Keep up the good writing!
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602
Review of Why I Write  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


Where does inspiration come from? Does a creative person have
power over his own life. Is she free? Or is he a prisoner of his
inspirations? At the core of our identity who are we?
I like your propisition to be free in our writing, but can we truely
write with out frear of censorship?

The Diagnosis was Psychosis

:)
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603
Review of Becket  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Par l'ordre du Senechal de
Castelnau, et de l'Echevin de
Cashors, servantes fideles du
tres vaillant rt tres puissant
Becket, Prince de Galles et
d'Aquitaine.
Ne touchez pas,
Ne coupez pas,
Ne depechez pas.

I like a good murder mystery. Murder can an art.

:)
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604
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)



I love panthiesm. Mobog; the cermony of the pig. A procession
of women follow one women with a pig in a basket on her back.
The women beat the pig to make it squeal. The squeals attract
evil spirits. The women dance and chant before each house,
drawing out evil spirits with the squealing pig. The procession
goes to the river with the evil spirits following. The pig is slaghtered
and thrown into the river, by the dancing and chanting women.
Thus, the evil spirits are drowned and the village is free of evil
for one year.<Borneo>
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605
Review of The Gift  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I have never been stocked, that is to say, I don't think I have.
This is a very well written story of a disfunctional relationship.
It always sad when love ones decapitate. All you can do is
condemb the sin, but forgive the sinner.

:)
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606
Review of MY QUEEN?  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


I thought topic was going somewhere else. But, this is a fun twist.
I had a childhood friend Micheal, who dicided later on to be Racheal.
It was amusing to watch the rubber-necking of the young men around
Racheal. Racheal was as thin as a read with copper complexion,
brown eyes and black wavy hair. A delicious deception, until it was
uncovered, then it got dangerous.
607
607
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


I love poetry! This is delicious! Here's a cemetery marker:

"Here lies a fool who went out the world
without learning why he came into it."
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608
Review of Something Nice  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I'm watching @Superman and reading a very familiar writer C.G.Jung.
"She projected Demons onto to me, thus I am threatened for trying to
return her to a normal life. By telling me her story she had betrayed the
Demons and attatched herself to an earthly human." I truely believe
we are part of a collective unconsciuos.

*****
<^>
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609
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Once upon a time the whole world was sleeping
And then God spoke. This is called the rude awaking.
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610
Review of Fading  
Review by bob county
Rated: ASR | (5.0)

So much casual death has drained away our souls.
The thick dirt mounted toward our quivering chin.
When only our heads were exposed the order came
to dig us out again and to get back in.

+
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611
Review of why should I?  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


Fr. Ducette, was french and he kissed me a lot. I was an alter boy.
It felt like a date, but I was raised to respect authority. I did find it
disturbing.
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612
Review of Bleed on Me  
Review by bob county
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


Have you read Tolstoid's Idiot? It's very poiniant.
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613
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


This is new? After the civil war, african americans formed their own towns
and built schools and banks. They new what slavery was: control of money
and education.
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614
Review of The Word Witch  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


A man shall be a habitation of dragons and a cour for owls. Isaiah 34:13
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615
Review of darkness  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


The blue sky splits open farther and father,
the daily sense of failure goes away,
a million suns come forward,
how many worlds circle in the darkness?
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616
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


The woman weaves a thread slowly
spinning her praises in fine intensity.
Her gift for him is tightly wrapped
with her tears.
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617
Review of Shannon's Gift  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)



"O God, do not keep silence;
do not hold thy peace or be still"
Psalm 83:1-18
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618
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


"If you would not be Forgotten when you are
dead, either write things worth reading or
do things worth writing."
Thomas Jefferson
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Review of THE REUNION  
Review by bob county
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Why is this ASR?

The Reunion I attended everyone thought I was taller.
One lady commented on my baldness another old friend
kept going on about his x-wife. He thought her boy
friend was going to beat him up. The x-wife had
brought the boy friend to the reunion.
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620
Review of Fingers  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Unratable.)


I like to use my forearms on
a lady's back.. squeezing
gently on her neck as I
rub her back slowly.
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Review of The Bowl  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Thou art infinite
and alone in your depth.
Thou art alone the unknowable
those who seek you will never quench you.
Thou art uncontainable.
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622
Review of Pit Of Darkness  
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Darkness is inert matter. Light is active
particle fusion of inert matter. You see they are
joined..... Spinning in caotic evolution.

Very compelling verse..

Muzzy.
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