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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Jeanne. Another good write, I could smell the smoke, feel the fear.Nice write.
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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good job Jeanne. Gory but so vividly written. Oh all that blood!.
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Review of My first Poem  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Great first try. Congratulations
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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautifully written. And at 14 years old. Marvelous. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Your fist  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Brave of you to write about it. And congratulations for loving yourself enough to leave. He taught you to love yourself, be grateful for a lesson learned. You can be proud of yourself now. Love to you.
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Review of Of Water  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Certainly a surprising ending. Nicely done.
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Review of Where We End  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like this. I like the repetition of "we'll end where we began." Very dramatic. Thanks for sharing
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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for this revealing piece on point of view. I must read through it again - and maybe again. Then I might try for this month's contest of 500 word or less story with two points of view.
Thanks again for this guide.
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Review of What If...  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nicely done. It flows, and one gets a revealing picture of the one who lies. So good. Thanks for sharing
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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (5.0)
I read your piece with interest. Who can say for sure that you and your Mum and brother really saw that ghost. I for one believe that you did. I truly believe there are many strange things in this world that most people overlook, just because it does not fit in with what they have been taught, or with firm beliefs that they have.
But you did see something. I say, treasure that memory. Not everyone has had such an experience. It is now a part of you and will be. So enjoy it. I think it is a fascinating story. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Write freely  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked this very much - an encouragement to write. I need that reminder often I find... for months go by with no writing - and then I get inspired ( as this piece inspired me) and I will write some more. Thank you for a lovely piece of writing that moves me towards more writing.
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Review of Worthless  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Oh - the pain of failed relationships. Well done, nice poem. Very sad though. I liked it.
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Review of Summer Fruit  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Lovely, and such a feeling of comfort. Very nicely done. Thanks for a very enjoyable poem.
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Review of The Sun Won't Set  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very nicely written I thought. Keep on writing!
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Review of Alzheimer  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Such a sad rendering of what it must be like. Very nicely done. Keep writing.
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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A lovely rendering. And you are so right! May your happiness continue to blossom for you day after day, year after year. A very inspiring piece. Thank you
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Review of When All's Lost  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very well written I thought. It kept my interest, all the way to the end. Surprising ending too.
I liked this story very much. thanks for sharing.
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Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
I sure did like it - well written, and it kept my interest all through. I'm not sure I understand the ending though.
Karen killed Donna? Donna saw her sister? Anyway, even tho I did not understand it, I liked it. Good effort I thought.
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Review of The Abyss  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Nicely written. I like the rhyme and the cadence.
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Review of Disgusting Love  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (1.0)
So sad, but sometimes that is life. At first I didn't understand - then I read
'expressing failed love' and I understood
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Review of Remember  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love it - it really captures this 'old age' thing - and the memories. Very nicely penned.
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Review of Gone  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice little story. I liked it.
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Review of The Birthday  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (4.0)
Touching story. You bring it to life. Very good!
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Review of The Delivery  
Review by Nbnelson2
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it very much. A totally unexpected ending. And a happy ending too.
Nice little story.
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