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Review Style
I am honest and encouraging in my reviews and will tell you everything commendable about your work, if i can find something to fault i will give gentle criticism, tips and ideas on ways to improve or develop the work i am assessing. Harsh words are never needed, pointing out flaws in work can be helpful but too much can put a person down and deter them from letting their creativity flow if they concentrate too much on something like sentence structure.
I'm good at...
Reading between the lines in a text, interpreting and understanding hidden meanings within a text, using a variety of different literal skills when needed, i am not so good at faulting sentence structure, and thats something I could improve on.
Favorite Genres
I love to read anything and everything, anything constructive and with creative flare.
Least Favorite Genres
Extreme science fiction.
Public Reviews
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Review of Fun With Felines  
Review by inkwell
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is so accurate it scares me! Traveling with cats is the worst!
Anyway, i actually really enjoyed this piece, its factual yet its very humerous, if this is not based upon a true story i believe it is very well composed! If someone told me this as a story, i would have believed it. Thats what i like to see in the work of fellow authors.
Good work. I hope to see some more of your work very soon.
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Review by inkwell
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hi There!

This appeals to me on a few levels, i like the general concept of it; being a poem about not being able to write a poem.. Nobody seems to appreciate irony any more! On a more serious note, There are a few things i would tewak about this poem in general, not much, but i feel that any form of constructive feedbak helps me!
The only thing that springs to mind here is the language used, you have rhymed it all very well and it seems well composed in that aspect, but i'd try changing it slightly so some of the verses flow more freely :) ..
Happy writing!
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Review of Sorrowing mist  
Review by inkwell
Rated: E | (1.5)
First of all, PUT THIS IN TO POETRY FORMAT!! Haha. Secondly, every single I that is refering to you or a character should be capitalised. Thirdly you have a lot of typo's and spelling mistakes and are missing a few aphostrophe's. the part where you say "you just let it rot" doesn't really make sense to me, i would change it if i were you. I would be more than happy to help you out with these things if you inbox me. Apart from all that you have an ok structure going on.


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Review by inkwell
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is a very good piece, i love how the language that you have used creates a vivid image. Its very clear. Just one thing, in the last line i feel that it should be "I won't even hear your name" it just mak it seem a little more literally correct.
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Review of Frightened  
Review by inkwell
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Brilliant haha, i found it quite entertaining towards the end. I think this is just the perfect example of what life is like for a child as soon as they are alone in the dark. This is also a good poem as it sets a good example to others about over-coming feats and phobias. Overall the poem is interesting and is fun to read. I would like to see more of your work sometime!


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Review by inkwell
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful piece of writing. Its by far the best memorial poem i have read yet. Your words speak the undeniable truth and its strange how something so terrible can make such a lovely piece of work. Theres so much going on in this poem and it all fits together snugly. Keep writing! I look forward to seeing more stuff.


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Review of Amputee World  
Review by inkwell
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can tell some deep thought has gone into the piece somewhere along the line. This makes your work very pleasurable to read. I like how you can read this from two perspectives, the reader and the character within the poem. I don't know if this was intentional but it is another reason i can seem to find a fault in your work. The language used is simple but due to the way this piece is written it just gives an even more effective feel. Overall congratulations on this piece and i will certainly be reading more of your work!


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Review of The Wind  
Review by inkwell
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely, eveything is great. From the format ti the language i cannot fault you at all from what ican see. The punctuation and gramma is near on perfect in my eyes ( i may be wrong but i cant seem to find anything ) and the spelling is good too. This piece really connotes a beautiful image with just a hint of sadness.


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Review of Lost  
Review by inkwell
Rated: E | (4.5)
I find this really interesting to read , it is very creative . :)
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Review of Mobile Lifestyle  
Review by inkwell
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I like this a lot , many people don't take note of this issue and you have said it in such a way that you have to think about it . Well done :)
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